wow.... thats insane....
too bad harry cant block voldemort from entering his mind....
haha i loved what ron said about gin admitting that she was scared and harry being done in my his gf on the same day :p
This is the first time I've e ver reviewed any fanfiction (and I've read alot) and it's not even a proper review but I just had to say that even though I loved reading Deathly Hallows I never cried whilst reading it but I bawled my eyes out when Charlie told everyone about Remus and Tonks dying in your fic. Not when they die but when he told everyone, it just struck a nerve for some reason. If it made me cry then you are a fine story teller indeed because i'm very picky about what I'll cry about!
This is a great fic and I'm going to go and finish it now. Just had to stop and write this first.
xx
..by the way--my mom and brother are REALLY mad at me, because I've been spending every waking moment on the computer reading this for the past couple days... i LOVE it!!! ...but you've gotten me into trouble, being such a great writer and all.. ..thanks..... JUST KIDDING --but i really do love it! i cant stress that enough!
omigod....that was scary! lol...OH WOW i really dont know what to say about the end of that chapter! ....i started laughing when he scared Ginny, then when Voldemort came into his mind...I'm like HARRY! You should've continued the Occlumency lessons lol --and i was laughing...but anxious at the same time to see what happens..then when they all apparated to the graveyard... *shivers* --well it's about 11:43 PM and i really need to get going....should i read the next chapter or not? lol...LOVE THE STORY!
haha sorry--i know its been almost a year--but i just HAD to comment!
OMG! That was a great chapter! Well, actually, I've been reading for a few months and never reviewed...sorry...the whole fic is wonderful. I keep coming back. I click to PS as soon as I get the update email. Keep it up...and update soon! (as your move permits, that is!)
Reading your story is a great way to pass time while waiting for Book 7. You're a great writer. I like the part where Harry pranks Ginny! Ginny's reaction is great too.
Melindaleo Tuesday 12th September 2006 05:49
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Thanks much! I began writing it as a way to pass the time. The recent update to JKRs Rubbish Bin makes me think we have longer than only one more year to wait, however - and this one won't last that long. Gulp!
NO! Don\'t stop there!! (bites nails nervously) You know, you can be so evil sometimes with those cliffhangers of yours, but your stories are so worth it. Must be why I keep coming back for more! Until next time . . .
Melindaleo Tuesday 12th September 2006 05:51
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Thanks so much! I'm trying to make up for the excess of cliffies by getting the next chapter out sooner than expected - so just hang in there.
You are such a great writer! I love all the stories you've written, even the one shots. But for this one, do you really have to end almost every other chapter with a cliffy? It's killing me and probably a bunch of other readers as well. Update when you can!
Melindaleo Tuesday 12th September 2006 05:50
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Heh - there are a lot of cliffies, aren't there? It works to keep the tension high and tight though. There is a cliffy next chapter, too, but the one after that is cliffy-free. Does that help?
Another fantastic chapter, but I'm getting really worried. I can't help wondering who else is going to die. And, of cousre, you don't need me to tell you that I'll be waiting on edge for the next chapter!
Melindaleo Tuesday 12th September 2006 05:46
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Aww, thanks much. The next chapter shouldn't be too much longer.
Oh my gosh. I have spent the last three nights reading this.
You have made me laugh, smile, giggle, cry, boo, hiss and generally sit on the edge of my seat (all while avoiding my husband and children). I have lost sleep just so I could keep reading - I am now officially addicted.
Your storyline is great although it sucks that you killed of Remus and Tonks (I kinda understand for Remus but didn\'t think you would kill off Tonks). Percy I could understand you could see that one coming.
So now I\'m sitting here waiting eagerly for the next update, hoping that everytime I check my e-mail there is an update note.
Great work!
Melindaleo Monday 11th September 2006 04:56
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Oh, welcome! I love to find new readers - who take the time to review! I'm glad you're enjoying it - even at the detriment of your family, lol I think my family glares at this computer when I get too involved, too.
Ahh! No way! Harry - Ginny - how could you do that to us! )
Man that freaked me out! I swear, i jumped right out of my seat when Harry's scar hurt - that was a great description of Voldemort invading his head though. I hate evil cliffies - well, i suppose they make the chapter that bit more exciting when it comes ... maybe, lol.
Another great chapter - Harry is such a boy, that\'s exactly what my friend would do in that situation. And if i was a witch, i\'d probably swing round and fire off a hex at him as well!
Melindaleo Monday 11th September 2006 04:54
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Hee - Harry IS a boy, isn't he? LOL, and I think Ginny's response was very appropriate. I think sometimes we all tend to forget that Harry IS still a teenage boy.
Melindaleo-
I have been reading Seventh Horcrux for the last several weeks and have been thoroughly enjoying it. You have done a wonderful job of picking up on JKR's hints and clues and weaving them into a great story. I love that it may be clsoe to what she has planned - which is why I started reading fanfic to start with! A way to get through the agony of yet another year before Book 7. And of all that I have read, yours is the most believable. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Melindaleo Monday 11th September 2006 04:52
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Aww, thanks very much! I'm glad it's helping to pass the time, since I've been using writing it for the same reason, lol. I've put a few of my ideas of what I think will happen in here, others are just things I'd like to see happen - yet still keep it plausible.
Oh. That was so good. And you had to stop at a stupid cliffy. Thanks. And nothing to bad has to happen. And poor Harry about the Dumbledore thing. Once again, very good.
Melindaleo Sunday 10th September 2006 18:46
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Thanks very much! You know I like my cliffies, and there's another big one coming
NO! NO! YOU LEFT US ON THE BIGGEST CLIFFHANGER EVER ! And we have to wait ANOTHER WEEK for the next chapter! I don't think I can bare the wait!....*sobs*
I was shaking during the last part....Scaring me like that....
I personally enjoyed the small bit with Harry scaring Ginny. DARN YOU! You make these light-hearted moments, then you come right back and slap us with this big bad event and THEN you leave us on this cliffhanger!
I need to know how this ends!
~Anni
Melindaleo Sunday 10th September 2006 18:41
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Aww, thanks! I'm going to try and get the chapter up in less than a week though - but if you didn't like THIS cliffie...
..thanks..... JUST KIDDING 
--but i really do love it! i cant stress that enough! 
I think sometimes we all tend to forget that Harry IS still a teenage boy.
