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Kelleypen
Friday 29th September 2006 02:24


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
St. Mag, I love this. I've resisted reading fan fic lately. I didn't want to be pulled in, but I couldn't resist yours forever, so today I relented. I'm glad I did. It was just what I needed.
St Margarets
Friday 29th September 2006 05:40
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
Oh, Kelley! I've missed your reviews! I'm glad you're taking a little time for yourself and doing some reading. This is the first time I've written H/G in almost two years (and I did it to cheer myself up) so I'm thrilled to have you read.
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Te Aroha
Monday 18th September 2006 20:34


Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
I can definetely hold off NZ while reading about a wedding.
Two points; 1: It's the South Island, not South Island, ( always ) and
2: the most common plural of Maori (singular) is Maori, the same word for singular and plural. (Not Maoris as in your reply to thenzguy.) Some people use both, but Maori is accepted as the more technically correct plural form. The history you're planning on doing sounds really cool!
Thought you might want to know
~T.A
St Margarets
Tuesday 19th September 2006 01:27
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
The absence of "the" is a typo, but I didn't know that about the Maori. Thanks for letting me know!
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Te Aroha
Monday 18th September 2006 09:40


Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Yayyy! New Zealand! Harry and Ginny in New Zealand! This is a dream come true! (no, seriously, I have had dreams about this.)
That was the nicest proposal scene I've read, I think - they just interacted so well. I'm interested to know what you're going to do get "your friends down under to sound right?" What differences in speech are you talking about?
REALLLY excited about NZ! (I live there) Please update really quickly!
~T.A
St Margarets
Monday 18th September 2006 10:18
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
Cool, another Kiwi reading! I'm glad you liked the proposal - they're hard to write without sounding too sweet. H/G don't make it to NZ until chapter nine or so. This first part is all about perparing for the wedding, etc. But don't worry, they will be on South Island before you know it!
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Sionwitch
Monday 18th September 2006 06:37


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 28

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Great first chapter both PoV, Im looking forward to read the rest
St Margarets
Monday 18th September 2006 10:16
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
I have eight chapters written, so updates should come quickly. Thanks for reading!
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Ardie Bea
Sunday 17th September 2006 23:56


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 27

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Woooohee! New Zealand! Take me there!
Oh. Yes. Typically great writing St. Mags. A nicely moving completely non-mawkish proposal scene. Loved the "I'm not going alone," and "Don't you take my ring back," !!!
Two comfortably stubborn people who have no trouble being real with each other about the stuff that matters.
And I really am excited about the NZ connection! Yahoo!
St Margarets
Monday 18th September 2006 03:29
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
I'm glad you're looking forward to NZ - the problem is that it took me seven chapters to get them out of England! No worries, though. I have lots of fun adventures planned for Part II. Thanks for reading! I'm not going to post this at SQ, so I'm glad you're reading here.
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shannon
Sunday 17th September 2006 05:38


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 11

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
I just love this story! Can I sheepishly admit that I've already read it on your livejournal? I haven't been able to figure out how to register with them without starting my own journal. Admittedly, I haven't tried that hard. LOL! Just how many places am I going to have to register to read/review your stories?!
St Margarets
Sunday 17th September 2006 06:02
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
Hi Shannon! You don't have to have a LJ account to comment on my journal. I allow anonymous comments. I think you have to have a journal of your own to register - but you don't have to write anything in it. What's good about your own journal is that you will get replies to your comments by e-mail and you don't have to hunt around for the journals you're watching - they just appear on your friends page.

Anyway, I'm glad you like this story. Sherry finally convinced me to put it here. I didn't think there would be that many people interested in an H/G go off to NZ story. LOL. And I still can't believe it.

Don't worry, I'm only at SQ, PS, and SIYE and Live Journal. LOL. I'm everywhere aren't I?

So nice to see you again and stop by my journal anytime!

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honourary_weasley
Friday 15th September 2006 22:33


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 173

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Oh wow. That was awesome. It's made me feel all warm and bubbly inside. I want someone like Harry to ask me to marry him now!!

That was really, really well written. Thanks so much, i loved it.
St Margarets
Saturday 16th September 2006 01:27
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
I'm glad you liked it. If you want to love Harry more, you should read Sherylyn's story which covers this same scene from Harry's POV. Thanks for reading!
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Felix Felicis
Friday 15th September 2006 15:50


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 214

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Ahh! What a great story! And now you're going to make me wait for the rest, I suppose. Oh well, so be it.

I love the description you used at the beginning, it was so... so accurate. I can really imagine and feel what Ginny was feeling. Being forced to wait in line and then walk (or run, as the case may be) to the gates.

Your dialogue is very good. This may be hard to match in your upcoming chapters because you've set the standard so high! I loved how they seemed to not even have to talk that much. Just being in each other's presence said more than mere words could say. The emotion of both Harry and Ginny is so well portrayed that I couldn't help but smile. I mean the smile of one who truly knows that Harry and Ginny are meant to be together and finally WILL be!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale with us! I can't wait for the rest!
St Margarets
Saturday 16th September 2006 01:26
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
I do enjoy good dialogue, so thanks for pointing that out. I'm pretty confident about H/G - but I'm working hard on getting my friends down under to sound right. This first part is set in England, so you're going to get a lot of Weasley love - then we're off on an adventure. Updates should come fairly quickly. Thanks for reading!
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jeanne
Friday 15th September 2006 15:08


Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
I love bothof these. Yours and Sherilyns. will be happy to read more because it will be the kind of adventure that will suit the two of them to a 'T'. Thanks, Jeanne.
St Margarets
Saturday 16th September 2006 01:23
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
I'm glad you like the idea of their going off to another place. Some people think they should just play Quidditch and hang out, but I think Harry would get bored with that. The real adventure starts in Part II - but there's plenty to keep them busy in this part! Thanks for reading!
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Uzamaki-girl
Friday 15th September 2006 09:51


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
This was awesome!!!^^
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 10:24
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!
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pakismith
Friday 15th September 2006 08:09


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 26

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Let's go to New Zealand!!!
Also I read St.Margaret's and I think is a brilliant idea to write Harry's and Ginny's POV in different fics.
Thanks.
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 10:23
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
It was Sherry's idea to take on Harry's PoV! Bless her. We'll see if she follows me all the way to NZ. Thanks for reading. It's good to see you again!
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Melindaleo
Friday 15th September 2006 00:33


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 465

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Ahh, and now that I'm done writing, I finally get the chance to read this one. My heart lurched for poor Harry when he thought Ginny was crying because she didn't want to marry him. Those Dursleys did a number.
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 01:59
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
Are you done with your entire story? Wow. You must be exhausted. Every week without fail you have a new chapter out. I'm so impressed. I'm glad you liked this. Yes, our Harry's been through a lot. More Dursley stuff will come up for him later on the story, since he no longer has that pesky Voldy guy to worry about.
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kcheled
Thursday 14th September 2006 23:02


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
lol so, okay, i found sherylyn's part of this story first, and the whole time i was wondering, what the heck is with that pamphlet??? i didn't know it was a mirrored version of your story until i saw it in her comments. well i am glad i found both of your stories! I can't wait to read more!!
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 01:57
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
LOL. I can see how that was confusing. Updates should come quickly. Thanks for reading!
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amamama
Thursday 14th September 2006 22:58


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 449

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Woohoooo! Wonderful, wonderful - what a treat! This also reminds me that you have another story I need to read... What can I say, you have such a wonderful way with words, I know this story is going to be a thrill to read. All the little details - spending too much time getting ready, Filch's torturing of the students (what a pain in the neck that guy is), skipping down to the gates, running through the muddy puddles - and there HE is. And plans with special places very often don't work out as planned. I know, but it is still wonderful and special and something to remember for life. Very, very sweet, but really - I can't expect anything less forom the Queen of Fluff, can I? Thank you, Mary. I loved it! Now I'm off to check Sherylyn's companion piece.

Cheers!
Berte
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 01:57
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
HI Berte! I was just talking about you yesterday when Bill put the Salmon Fishing in Norway brochure on my computer screen. LOL I'm so glad to hear from you. I hope you had a great summer. I'll send you an e-mail one of these days and tell you about mine. I finished the Artist's Way course and I'm going to start Vein of Gold very soon.

I *would* like you to read The Frog Prince. It's not fluffy, but it's very romantic. And it's short - only four chapters! Thanks so much for reading. and it's so good to hear from you, my dear.

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parakletos
Thursday 14th September 2006 18:58


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 209

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Good to see it posted here and well worth a second (or third!) read.
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 01:52
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
LOL. I think you've gone beyond the call of duty. Thanks. I'm so glad Sherry is writing again!
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Musings
Thursday 14th September 2006 18:33


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
This is just terrfic! I think I missed this during my absence from LJ, but I always love reading your work and am looking forward to following this one quite a bit! Thanks for sharing this with us!
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 01:51
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
Thanks so much. LJ does take up a lot of time, doesn't it? I have a hard time keeping up. Thanks for reading this and be sure to check out Sherry's version.
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mary-v
Thursday 14th September 2006 18:13


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 494

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
AH! YOU'RE BACK!! *Throws a party* Absolutely amazing!!! OMG! I'm practically bouncing off the walls in excitement for this fic!!! GAH! Everythign was just so beautiful and romantic... with a small touch of angst but really everything just lit my ''heart afire''. *sigh* Beautiful.
Squee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maria
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 01:50
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
Hi sweetie! It's very good to be back writing H/G - it's been over a year for me. As always, thanks for reading! I hope you will read Sherry's version as well - she does a great job with Harry.
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Sherylyn
Thursday 14th September 2006 16:28


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 55

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
To BasketKiwi: here's the link to my story -- thanks for asking!
http://www.phoenixsong.net/fanfiction/story/4155/
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BasketKiwi
Thursday 14th September 2006 16:16


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Wow! I'm so excited! You're starting another story!! (Well, technically, you're not just starting it, but you know what I mean.) I love this so far. As always. And I'd really like to read the one from Harry's view that your beta wrote! Just so you know, unless it's my computer, I don't think your link worked. It says "For Harry’s POV on all this, look here" but there's no link on "here" and I'm not sure of your beta's name so... Yeah. Just wanted to make sure you were aware! Again, it may be my computer. Wouldn't be the first time. I love the ring! It's so perfect for them. And I'm already interested in what New Zealand is going to be like! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 01:48
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
I hope you saw Sherry's note. I think the link is fixed now. Alas, you won't here about magical NZ until Part One is finished. (It's seven chapters long) You can always check out my live journal if you want a sneek peek. Thanks for reading. Updates should come quickly.
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Grandma Kate
Thursday 14th September 2006 15:59


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 966

Part I: 1: Hearts Afire
Wonderful beginning. Harry and Ginny are spot on.
St Margarets
Friday 15th September 2006 01:46
Part I: 1: Hearts Afire (Author Response)
You didn't have to read this again! LOL. But I'm glad you read Sherry's. She writes a wonderful Harry, I think.
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