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chiantiqueen
Friday 28th December 2007 06:46


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159

2: Revenge is not so sweet
Aww James is so sweet, although not sure the torturing bit but Snape did deserve some punishment for his comments. Again great chapter!
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Evelyn
Monday 11th December 2006 14:39


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 340

2: Revenge is not so sweet
I like the feeling of this story. Strage to describe... It flows along so easily, light-hearted really, and at the same time there's the bittersweet title that reminds us...

Very cute interaction between James and Lily. And it's a nice change to have her behave like she does here.
girlyswot
Monday 11th December 2006 15:44
2: Revenge is not so sweet (Author Response)
Thanks! I wanted to try and write a James/Lily story avoiding the usual caricatures and stereotypes but just have them as two 'normal' teenagers growing up a bit. And, despite the title, I'm just a fluffer at heart!
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lacyrachil
Wednesday 15th November 2006 19:14


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251

2: Revenge is not so sweet
Very nice. You capture the teen angst well.
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Ladybug
Saturday 23rd September 2006 21:57


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

2: Revenge is not so sweet
Very nice! I'm enjoying James trying to be charming and Lily trying to resist. Love this line: It was a three sentence conversation and Iíve told you every one of them. Hehehe, that little exchange was very cute.
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