I like the feeling of this story. Strage to describe... It flows along so easily, light-hearted really, and at the same time there's the bittersweet title that reminds us...
Very cute interaction between James and Lily. And it's a nice change to have her behave like she does here.
girlyswot Monday 11th December 2006 10:44
2: Revenge is not so sweet (Author Response)
Thanks! I wanted to try and write a James/Lily story avoiding the usual caricatures and stereotypes but just have them as two 'normal' teenagers growing up a bit. And, despite the title, I'm just a fluffer at heart!
Very nice! I'm enjoying James trying to be charming and Lily trying to resist. Love this line: It was a three sentence conversation and Iíve told you every one of them. Hehehe, that little exchange was very cute.