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Friday 16th February 2007 05:47

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

1: Good News
I get all excited when I see a WIP that's become completed ... Now I look forward to getting engrossed in this story from beginning to end. What a lovely first chapter, such a dramatic contrast between Oliver's uncle and father. Very smooth writing, it's a pleasure to read.
Sunday 31st December 2006 23:55

1: Good News
he rovks he is the cutest .this story rocks

Wednesday 29th November 2006 20:10

1: Good News
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Sunday 1st October 2006 21:13

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543

1: Good News
Really brilliant. Poor Oliver who knew he had such a horrible father. Loved it.
Thursday 28th September 2006 07:17

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 582

1: Good News
Congratulations on such a successful and fascinating first chapter! This is a story that I hope will be posted at regular intervals. Your characterizations are spot-on; I love the contrast in opinion of Oliver's uncle and father. It's very easy to see which man Oliver wants to emulate. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Thursday 28th September 2006 08:53
1: Good News (Author Response)
Hi Arnel,

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I have thirteen chapters completed, so yes, the intervals will be quite regular. Chapter two is already with my beta. Hope you enjoy!
Monday 25th September 2006 14:40

7th year
Num. of Reviews: 340

1: Good News
Looks like an interesting story. I really like your Oliver, I think... Love the man you've made out of him. And I'm eager to know how his relationship with his father develops.
Monday 25th September 2006 14:53
1: Good News (Author Response)
Hi Evelyn,
Thanks so much for reading! Well- you've hit on two major themes of the story - Oliver's maturation, and his relationship with his father. We'll see how he comes out on both!
Monday 25th September 2006 11:34

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169

1: Good News
This looks wonderful.
I'm very interested to ride along with Oliver at the beginning of his career.
Great idea! Nice tight wrighting.
Monday 25th September 2006 14:50
1: Good News (Author Response)
Oh wow, my first official Phoenix Song review. Thanks so much for reading! Hope you stick with Oliver on that ride, because it's going to hit some bumps!
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