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gymnastgal19
Sunday 2nd December 2007 15:59
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
| In Memory |
wow! that was amazing! you really captured remus's attitude towards everything... it must have been really tough on him, losing all his friends in one go!
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| Natalie
Friday 12th May 2006 07:57
| In Memory |
| it was a good chappie. |
| BasketKiwi
Monday 14th November 2005 10:57
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233 | In Memory |
| Oh my. Not another letter! I think this one's even sadder than the other two! Brilliant, though. And just like Remus, I'd imagine. Wow. Great job with it, it was fantabulous! ^^ |
| angelmorph
Wednesday 17th August 2005 20:51
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 27 | In Memory |
It's sad that they never had this coversation before Sirius died. Some of the things in there... Well I guess we all have our regrets. I particularly liked the line, " You should have seen the look on Prof...er, Minerva's face, when she and Filius couldn't find anything wrong with it!" It brought a smile to my face. The reference to the young werewolf that was killed by his own father struck a cord in my heart.
All in all, great work,
 Angelmorph |
| snowball
Thursday 26th May 2005 01:47
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 27 | In Memory |
| *Sniff* I cried reading this story. Very well written. The anger and sadness is well potrayed. |
| Mariposa
Thursday 7th April 2005 09:02
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51 | In Memory |
*Sniffles and tears*
Well done. |
| caitlin weinrich
Friday 11th March 2005 19:19
| In Memory |
that is really good i mean really good
caitlin weinrich
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| sas
Saturday 11th December 2004 07:14
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 14 | In Memory |
| beautyful, enough said. |
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Tuesday 5th October 2004 17:05
| In Memory |
Ohhh. I love this one! Remus is so sad, and so angry--and so real .
He's strong, yes, but sometimes even our heroic Remus must let it go. And to write Sirius a letter--very sweet. :-D
It was perfectly in character, well written, and I love it. Nice job! :-D
--Siri |
| Byrd
Sunday 3rd October 2004 22:16
| In Memory |
| Wow. This letter is your best yet, in my opinion. I love how you capture the emotions of the characters perfectly, it's spot-on (for my views of them at least). I don't have much to say, honestly, "perfect" just seems to describe this one. Great job.
~Ja ne~ |
| VisserVoldemort
Wednesday 29th September 2004 19:39
| In Memory |
| Extremely well-written. Great job. :) |
| Kestrel
Wednesday 28th July 2004 21:38
| In Memory |
*sniffles* An excellent goodbye to a wonderful friend..  WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE?!?!
Okay. Anyways.. I like your use of British lingo, like 'mate' and 'bloke.' It's very nice, and you use it well. Remus' pain is very, very easily seen. That's nice.. It's good to see that he's hurting, because you KNOW he is. His pain isn't overblown, though, which is good. It's a " + +blocked+ + , this sucks, I hurt, and want my friends back. But you know what, I have things to do with what's left of my life. So NYAH!" kind of pain. 
~Kes |
| Dana Kenedy
Tuesday 20th July 2004 19:21
| In Memory |
Really good!! written soooo well. Poor Remus I'll check out your other fics quite soon |
| Telepwen
Monday 12th July 2004 20:55
| In Memory |
It's an interesting piece, to be sure. Especially when Remus is reminiscing about how lucky he was, to have friends, to have family that cared. That no one murdered him in cold blood just because they couldn't deal with him anymore, and killing him was a legal and socially acceptable way out. It's certainly something that makes a person think. Yes, that night that James and Lily died, he lost everything. Everyone. He's possibly the person who lost the most in the entire series. You show that here.
Your ideas are good, though they need some polish on the finished product. With time and practise, I'm sure that you will be a great writer capable of rivalling even the best of revered authors. Until next time--
--Sara |
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