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gymnastgal19
Sunday 2nd December 2007 16:01
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
| Harry's Last Letter |
wow! that was amazing! you really got harry's attitude! i feel so bad for harry! losing everything because of a stupid prophecy...
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| BasketKiwi
Monday 14th November 2005 10:52
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233 | Harry's Last Letter |
| Wow. That was so perfect! I think that's what Harry's letter would really be like: angry, confused, and basically miserable. I liked how you crossed some things out, and how some of the things after the crossed-out things didn't make sense if you didn't read the crossed-out thing... I hope you know what I mean. Anyway, great job, and I loved it and hoped that he got the letter somehow or another! n.n |
| angelmorph
Wednesday 17th August 2005 21:00
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 27 | Harry's Last Letter |
Interesting... Like the way you have things crossed out. How'd you manage that? Had to read twice: Once with all the text an once with only why he didn't cross out. Some of it isn't very clear if you ignore the cross-out but given Harry's state of mind when writing this that makes sense. It's a shame he crossed out all the colourful bits, those that made me laugh.
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| snowball
Thursday 26th May 2005 18:50
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 27 | Harry's Last Letter |
| Vey typical Harry anger. Well written, but I like Remus' letter better |
| Mariposa
Thursday 7th April 2005 09:05
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51 | Harry's Last Letter |
| I like how you made sure his two trains of thought keep intersecting. And how it comes across as he's moved onto the acceptance stage of grieving. |
| Siri
Tuesday 5th October 2004 17:09
| Harry's Last Letter |
You know what? I didn't leave a name or e-mail on my review for Remus' letter. Ah, well. #6 was me.
But anywho--Harry's letter. The scratchout's were a vey Harry-ish thing to do. Nice thought, there. I like this letter as well, though not as much as Remus'. It's very appropriate, though, all the same.
For a third time (I believe I've reviewed backwards): Nice!
I'll be waiting for more.
--Siri |
| Byrd
Sunday 3rd October 2004 22:07
| Harry's Last Letter |
| Well, interesting. I like how you did the crossed out sections, seems like a Harry-thing to do. Sounds like Harry to me too, wonderful job again. Typical Harry anger response, although I must say I can't blame him. You did wonderfully in getting Harry's reaction down, I love these letters of yours. On to the next... |
| Dana Kenedy
Tuesday 20th July 2004 19:35
| Harry's Last Letter |
Awwww so sad!...and once again a good fic, let me know if you write anymore letter thhingys |
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