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moralitas
Sunday 23rd August 2009 21:22
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 34
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| wow. so emotional. sad and happy at the same time. *sniff* good job! |
| alifromnm
Thursday 23rd April 2009 13:11
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13 | The Love of Harry and Ginny |
 Wonderful!
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Felix Felicis
Thursday 23rd April 2009 18:27 | The Love of Harry and Ginny (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
| Dad
Thursday 23rd April 2009 11:03
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 463 | The Love of Harry and Ginny |
| Read this before and still feel the same. It is so emotional it hurts. (But please remember, I am a grumpy old man). |
Felix Felicis
Thursday 23rd April 2009 18:27 | The Love of Harry and Ginny (Author Response) |
| The fact that you read this a second time says more than words alone. You're one of the reasons I enjoy writing so much! |
| gymnastgal19
Sunday 31st August 2008 17:46
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | The Love of Harry and Ginny |
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| gymnastgal19
Sunday 13th July 2008 09:27
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | The Love of Harry and Ginny |
interesting story... it was a lil hard to follow at times though... i couldnt tell if she was dream ing or hallucinating or if it was really happening at some parts
but nice story! i still liked it 
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Felix Felicis
Tuesday 15th July 2008 18:35 | The Love of Harry and Ginny (Author Response) |
| Yeah, it was a bit hard to write at times, too! This was one of my earlier stories so I'm glad you liked it, even with its faults |
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Thursday 10th April 2008 02:01
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| Steven Carnell
Wednesday 5th December 2007 04:16
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 74 | The Love of Harry and Ginny |
This is a difficult one to comment on. The emotions are very personal and quite well described. A very difficult approach and you have handled it quite well. It is always one of the hardest types of descriptive writing - high emotion and intense pain. Very good try, but I must say only further practice will sharpen your skills. You are not quite there yet, but you are much better at it than I am now. It only needs a little tweaking to tighten the description. Perhaps spend a little more effort on first engaging the reader, then take them on the emotional journey.
Well done! Good effort and work. |
| bianca
Saturday 1st December 2007 09:30
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| i love it it is sooooooooo sweet i love irt i almost started to sry |
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Thursday 27th September 2007 13:16
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That was so amazing i can't describe it... it made me cry for ages it was so moving. I am completely obsessed with harry potter and have read every book 7 times going on 8- yet I enjoy each book just as much if not more every time I read them. How do you write like that? I beg you to write more!!!!!!!
Thankyou so much,
Chloe
Age 12 dude i was so serious, flip, wot a total goon i'm gonna go away an hide now ( |
| ginny weasley
Thursday 27th September 2007 13:12
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that made me cry boo hoo...wow that was sooo good lol keep up the gd work dude
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Saturday 11th August 2007 19:22
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very nice. Avid description and wonderful memories very vivid I really liked the tone you put in this piece. Keep up the good work! |
| emicav
Friday 13th July 2007 13:49
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | The Love of Harry and Ginny |
| wow. this was amazing. i was about to cry along with ginny the entire time. you are very talented. dont ever stop writing. emilygail0323@aol.com |
| bonbon_13
Tuesday 26th June 2007 22:34
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35 | The Love of Harry and Ginny |
| Dude...Harry didn't die, did he? I think you got it a bit wrong :S Great story, I love it! |
| pyromain
Monday 25th June 2007 09:29
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | The Love of Harry and Ginny |
| I think it is a good story, I don't like it when harry dies but coming back for her is something I do like. |
| chloe meanwell
Thursday 12th April 2007 13:28
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That was so amazing i can't describe it... it made me cry for ages it was so moving. I am completely obsessed with harry potter and have read every book 7 times going on 8- yet I enjoy each book just as much if not more every time I read them. How do you write like that? I beg you to write more!!!!!!!
Thankyou so much,
Chloe
Age 12 |
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Sunday 14th January 2007 17:17
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Nice. vivid. hard to understand but beatiful. 4/5 would be my rating.
Congrats! |
Felix Felicis
Saturday 20th January 2007 06:43 | The Love of Harry and Ginny (Author Response) |
| Vivid is such a wonderful word. Thank you so much for using it in regards to my story! |
| Lena
Saturday 23rd December 2006 04:51
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| harry and ginny this is a cool love! |
Felix Felicis
Saturday 20th January 2007 06:44 | The Love of Harry and Ginny (Author Response) |
| It sure is! You'd probably never believe that once upon a time I was a die-hard Harry/Hermione fan. Good thing my wife knocked some sense into me! |
| jenny
Thursday 30th November 2006 18:51
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is this going into the last book or harry potter is this the end of it or did sumone just make it up.?
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Wednesday 29th November 2006 22:30
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