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Friday 28th December 2007 07:29

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159

Great chapter. Poor Lily. First she has muggle-born prejudice to deal with and then we learn the secret about her mother. I'm glad, for her sake, that James is so understanding and free from the prejudices of other so called purebloods.
Grandma Kate
Sunday 28th January 2007 15:19

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 966

A good start. Poor Lily with such a secret to keep.
Sunday 28th January 2007 16:01
1:Revelations (Author Response)
Thank you! Yes, it must have been hard, especially since she wouldn't have known at first that it was such a big deal in the wizarding world.
Tuesday 12th December 2006 08:32

7th year
Num. of Reviews: 340

That was full of surprises... Nice change.

I loved the dialogue, especially James' nonchalant way of proposing.
Tuesday 12th December 2006 11:44
1:Revelations (Author Response)
I'm glad you liked it. This one is a little more angsty than the last. But still plenty of lovely fluff.
Wednesday 15th November 2006 10:18

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 23

OMG! genius! nothing else i can say. when is the next 1?
Wednesday 15th November 2006 10:31
1:Revelations (Author Response)
You're too kind! The next chapter is with my beta so shouldn't be too long to wait. The fic is basically finished, so the updates will be pretty regular. I'm glad you're enjoying it - did you read the prequel 'Had we but world enough and time'?
Friday 10th November 2006 12:31

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1396

What a way to propose .
Interesting about Lily's parents. I like it, but does it really fit what we know from canon? Wouldn't Hogwarts (with its registry) know that Lily is not really Muggleborn but Halfblood?
Oh well, it very good, nicely written.
Friday 10th November 2006 12:41
1:Revelations (Author Response)
Thanks for taking the trouble to review.

About Lily's parents - I take your point that some people may have known about Lily's mother (and certainly that would include some teachers at Hogwarts).

However, I don't think it would have been general knowledge because (i) she would have had a different surname from Lily and (ii) (in my world!) being a Turntail had such stigma that Lily wouldn't have wanted people to know about it, so she'd have let them go on thinking she was Muggle-born.

I think that the Wizarding world is small and tight-knit enough that everyone knows (or at least knows of) pretty much everyone else, so the assumption on meeting a girl whose family you've never heard of is that she's Muggle-born.

Anyway, I hope you'll keep reading!
Thursday 9th November 2006 18:37

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 106

So Lily's dad hated magic--a rational explanation for what why Petunia hates it so much and why she was drawn to Vernon. Aside from his good looks and suave charm, that is.
Friday 10th November 2006 18:39
1:Revelations (Author Response)
Yes - I think there's lots of things going on in Petunia's hatred of magic. Her father's issues might be one thing; jealousy and fear are almost certainly part of it. We'll see a little bit more of the Evans family dynamics later in the story.

But as to why she married Vernon - beats me!
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