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Friday 5th January 2007 16:17

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 59

This was a really good chapter. I really felt Percy's disappointment over the Hogwarts letter thing. I think most of us have experienced "having our thunder stolen" at least once or twice, and when you are young it is even harder. Children really do rely on positive reinforcement for their achievements and when that doesn't come it is often devestating for them. I really like that you are writing this story. I'm sure most of us are pretty annoyed with Percy by this time, and it is always a good idea to look at everybody's POV. We'll probably be surprised at what we find out.

Great job, again, and I look forward to the next installment!
Friday 5th January 2007 14:13

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 18

i do like this. I'm intrigued by the diary perspective and you portay an excellent sense of Percy's voice speaking, I can almost see the expressions as he feels the emotions. Looking forward to the next one!
Friday 5th January 2007 05:37

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 120

i really like this, very insightful and quite different from what we're used to. You're going a bit slow though, making sure we don't miss any details. It's really good, but make sure you don't drag the background story too much, after all, it is just background what you're telling us. Anxiously waiting to read more, update soon!
Thursday 4th January 2007 16:36

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 67

Keep them coming, they are awesome!
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