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Dad
Sunday 20th September 2009 02:54


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 503

1: Death of a Hero
I just picked this story at random. I thought it was a bit depressing.
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Thorn
Sunday 25th January 2009 10:29


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51

1: Death of a Hero
pleas write more! all of your story's are really tuching and they make me cry, good work . write more!
Ari
Monday 26th January 2009 20:20
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
Thank you, Thorn, I'm glad you like it.

I've stopped writing H/G fanfic now, so I no longer post stories here. however, if you want to read some more, not nessecarily of H/G leanings and including my Sentence Story sets, go to http://www.freewebs.com/rhythempoets/index.htm and click on the link to the Harry Potter fanfic.

As always, thanks for R&Ring!

~Ari
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Thorn
Saturday 24th January 2009 20:52


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51

1: Death of a Hero
snif i cant stop crying this is really tuching.
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pyromain
Wednesday 5th December 2007 03:57


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

1: Death of a Hero
Great story I really liked it. Specially the ghost of harry.
Ari
Wednesday 5th December 2007 15:55
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
Thanks Pyro. Glad you liked him.
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sophie howar
Sunday 2nd December 2007 15:10


1: Death of a Hero
thi is a amazing story please post me some when you can please please please please :
Ari
Monday 3rd December 2007 09:38
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
It's a one-shot, so there's no more. sorry
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Sunday 23rd September 2007 10:43


1: Death of a Hero
Rather eerie, but good!
Ari
Sunday 23rd September 2007 21:24
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
Oh, wow. It was finally eerie for someone! I wrote it trying to be eerie, but it didn't seem to work...
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Friday 17th August 2007 13:47


1: Death of a Hero


Very Poetic
Ari
Sunday 23rd September 2007 21:23
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
Thank you.
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Astrid
Wednesday 28th March 2007 12:15


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336

1: Death of a Hero
Wow
Ari
Wednesday 28th March 2007 15:41
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
Thanks very much for reviewing, Astrid
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magraret
Wednesday 14th February 2007 03:40


1: Death of a Hero
(snifs, wipes tear from eye) that was really sad!
Ari
Friday 16th February 2007 14:20
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
But, just imagine all the fun things that could happen on the end of it!
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ekarpins
Tuesday 13th February 2007 12:12


1: Death of a Hero
another wonderful story.
I have siad it before and I'll say it again: your stories have streaks of gold in them, but are surroundd by rocks.

STill wonderful story
Ari
Friday 16th February 2007 14:19
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
Unfortunately, there aren't enough gold specks to make a nugget. I'm trying, though.

Thankee very much
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No Idea Why I Smile
Tuesday 13th February 2007 10:58


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 72

1: Death of a Hero
that was so sad...i seriously cried..good but sad...
Ari
Friday 16th February 2007 14:18
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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hewithnoname
Tuesday 13th February 2007 09:10


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 73

1: Death of a Hero
Ahh, that was good. Nice action, and nice memorys. Very good, I wait for the next one with baited breath.
Ari
Friday 16th February 2007 14:17
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
*sweeps off her hat and bows*

Thankee HWNN. I am too.
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pud
Tuesday 13th February 2007 07:46


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that was amazing! keep writing! i like harry's ghost. i'm glad ginny didn't do crazy or kill herself, and it's really sad that molly did. i can't wait to read for of your stories!
Au Revoir,
Pud
Ari
Friday 16th February 2007 14:17
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
Thank you, pud. I'm glad you like the small apparition of Harry. And I'm going to see if Lady Chi will halp me with my sentence stories next for you all to read. They're mostly fun stuff, so it'll be a change from this horrible habit I have of killing characters.
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roastpuff
Monday 12th February 2007 15:57


1: Death of a Hero
Nice, short and sweet. What more could one ask?

By the way... kitsune-waiii?
Ari
Friday 16th February 2007 14:13
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
Something that shines with a good idea?

Seriously, thanks for the review.
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Kamalia
Monday 12th February 2007 15:38


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 142

1: Death of a Hero
You certainly have no scruples in killing off characters. This made me sad, though. Especially about Fred and George. They're my favorite Weasleys. Dang it! You give these little teasers...I don't suppose there's any more?

Great job!
Ari
Friday 16th February 2007 14:04
1: Death of a Hero (Author Response)
I hadn't really thought of making another chapter, Kamalia. And I do love those 'little teasers' -- They're fun to write, but I don't do it intentionally. I don't even think of doing them.

Nope. No scruples against killing characters. It's a favourite thing to do, and it happens when the piece of fiction you spend all your time writing is about an immortal - lots of death.

Thank you very, very much for your review. I appreciate it!
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