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Ladybug
Thursday 15th March 2007 08:40
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375
| Chapter 2 |
Oh, that is so lovely! I adore Harry's poor defensive and doubting self. Beautifully done!
Maybe, she had dumped him without his even noticing!
I don't know whether to laugh or cry - it's so funny, but it's so heartbreaking for Harry. Wonderful! |
critmo
Friday 16th March 2007 09:44 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
| I think it's quite natural to happen. The moment he gives up on her, he gives up on security as well. He can never be certain now how she feels, and the distance will not help with that. |
| Evelyn
Sunday 4th March 2007 03:47
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 340 | Chapter 2 |
| Very nice, as was to be expected. I really liked how you wrote jealous Harry, especially his idea of Ginny dumping him without his noticing... Poor, clueless Harry. I'm glad he understood things better in the end. |
critmo
Sunday 4th March 2007 08:31 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
| As I said, distance is a decisive factor. All of a sudden, things that seemed clear become very uncertain, indeed. Have you ever wondered about turning off the oven or something when you're not able to check? |
| Patches
Thursday 22nd February 2007 22:39
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1141 | Chapter 2 |
| Ok. 2 points of view! You really like to drag out the suspense! Not a bad carrot to keep the readers coming back! I like it! Thanks for writing. p |
critmo
Friday 23rd February 2007 09:49 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
I like carrots, too.  |
| harry_ginnyphile
Wednesday 21st February 2007 20:10
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 44 | Chapter 2 |
What I loved about this chapter was the look into Harry's mind ... the mirrored point of view in comparison to Ginny's in the previous chapter. I do so love how our hero's mind works!!  |
critmo
Thursday 22nd February 2007 02:36 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
| It's not working all that well sometimes. I think Harry acts on instincts more than on the things he has thought through. |
| BasketKiwi
Monday 5th February 2007 17:40
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233 | Chapter 2 |
Ooh, I really want to see where this goes! I'm really excited for the next chapter. I like your take on the situation; it's interesting. Great job so far! I love this little universe.  |
critmo
Sunday 11th February 2007 10:44 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
| Thank you. Chapter three should be up soon. |
| ninkenate
Monday 5th February 2007 13:54
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144 | Chapter 2 |
| Very good. I look forward to the next chapter and finding out how each of them reacts to the embrace (and more?). Maybe Ginny can help relieve Harry's fears and he help her too while finally deterring the littlest veela. If harry and Ginny can figure things out, it may go a long way in helping things between Ron and Hermione. |
critmo
Sunday 11th February 2007 10:43 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
| Hm, that way might be shorter than you expect. |
| hp4-sauce
Saturday 27th January 2007 16:27
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 86 | Chapter 2 |
| I really appreciated this pensive Harry voicing many of the doubts regarding the breakup and its possible effects on Ginny's feelings for him, that any of us might have. I think it would be entirely natural for him to be thinking exactly the things you highlighted. Better done than I have seen in most of the myriad versions of this period immediately following the funeral. Great job. |
critmo
Tuesday 30th January 2007 07:15 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
| Thanks a lot. It's good to hear that the analysis works for you. |
| amamama
Friday 26th January 2007 03:02
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 440 | Chapter 2 |
Wee! Harry's pov was just as nerve-racking as Ginny's. Nobody came here to help him, to point things out like Fleur did for Ginny (and my, would that have been awkward), he's been facing his demons alone. With H/G not on speaking terms, I guess that tension just added to his own. Hm... I look forward to see what you have in store for them - will you now go on to their moods over the same period of time?
Still like this. A lot.
Cheers! |
critmo
Friday 26th January 2007 08:13 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
I promised to resolve the cliffie in the next chapter, but Ron and Hermione will have to do some resolving too - later.
Thanks for r/r. |
| stardust610
Thursday 25th January 2007 07:26
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51 | Chapter 2 |
| Ooh, wonderful! I like how this chapter is in Harry's point of view and how it matches to the previous chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing more! |
critmo
Thursday 25th January 2007 08:50 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
| I'm glad that the two chapters work together. |
| Miri
Thursday 25th January 2007 07:16
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 47 | Chapter 2 |
Aughh! Another romantic cliffie! Will try to wait with patience for the next chapter.
In the meantime, I really enjoyed the matching introspectiveness of this chapter with the previous one with Ginny's thoughts. And some further fleshing out of the problems with the trio--an all too possible situaton with Ron and Hermione. |
critmo
Thursday 25th January 2007 08:48 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
I promise the next chapter will push you over the cliff.
However, Ron and Hermione may surprise you yet. |
| Wolf's Scream
Thursday 25th January 2007 06:30
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 372 | Chapter 2 |
| Heh. A certain amount of introspection can be a Good Thing. Unfortuantely, the catalyst(s) for that are not always pleasant. :-} Well done! |
critmo
Thursday 25th January 2007 08:46 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
| Cheers, mate. |
| jeanne
Thursday 25th January 2007 05:48
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 508 | Chapter 2 |
| Makes a lot of sense, doesn,t it ? Excellent. |
critmo
Thursday 25th January 2007 08:46 | Chapter 2 (Author Response) |
| I thought it did, and I'm glad you think so too. |
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