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Tuesday 8th January 2008 19:35

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 29

2: Downfall
" But still, it should have been a crack team of Aurors that freed her and put the miscreant centaurs in their place, not her nemesis here at Hogwarts."

Considering how easily Dumbledore handled the group that came to arrest him even though Kinglsey didn't take part, I doubt that a team of Aurors could have done any better, at least not without incurring casualties and also starting a war with the centaurs.

Dumbledore her nemesis? Talk about an inflated self image. To Dumbledore she was never more than a major nuisance.
Thursday 10th January 2008 05:16
2: Downfall (Author Response)
Yes, I agree that Aurors likely would have down less well than Dumbledore. But this is Umbridge's perception of things. Remember she values the ministry above all else and does not think so highly of Dumbledore.
And it seems that I succeeded in this chapter -- inflated self image is a good description of Umbridge.
Thanks for taking the time to read and respond. This is a delayed story, but it will be finished.
Wednesday 31st January 2007 16:26

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 79

2: Downfall
Look at this! I was wondering when we would be able to read this!

She is a horrid toad, isn't she? Favorite lines are still the last three.

Now when can we expect to see the next chapter??

Great job in capturing this lost moment.

Thursday 1st February 2007 05:12
2: Downfall (Author Response)
Hey you,
The first chapter has been up for a week . Since I got sidetracked with another story, it will be a couple weeks (maybe) before I get the third chapter out. I just have too many ideas
Thank you for reviewing. You are always too kind.
Wednesday 31st January 2007 04:04

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 120

2: Downfall
this is fun to read, i love stories from unusual perspectives... keep going
Wednesday 31st January 2007 05:18
2: Downfall (Author Response)
Thank you. I plan at least two more chapters. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Tuesday 30th January 2007 19:25

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25

2: Downfall
I think you captured her arrogant, twisted personality perfectly.
Wednesday 31st January 2007 05:17
2: Downfall (Author Response)
Thank you (I think ). I appreciate your taking time to read and review!
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