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pyromain
Wednesday 6th June 2007 13:21
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580
| The Vacation |
| I really hoped it would continue, I was just starting to really get a feel for the story when I reached the end. I think it has potenial and I would love to read more if you wrote it. Thanks for this piece |
Ari
Wednesday 6th June 2007 20:21 | The Vacation (Author Response) |
Well, seeming as so many think it needs more, I'll see what i can do.
You're welcome |
| kitty
Thursday 12th April 2007 08:27
| The Vacation |
i loved it. it was wonderfull i really enjoyed it i was a bit dissapointed when it ended i would love it if there was more please:
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Ari
Thursday 12th April 2007 17:51 | The Vacation (Author Response) |
| I don't have any more of this story in me, but you're welcome to wait for my chaptered story, which I'm working on getting betaed at the moment. |
| Astrid
Wednesday 28th March 2007 16:20
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | The Vacation |
| Awww, fun |
Ari
Wednesday 28th March 2007 19:37 | The Vacation (Author Response) |
| Thanks. It was supposed to be a happy story, considering my other two were so dark and dreary |
| Wolfsong
Monday 26th March 2007 13:18
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 11 | The Vacation |
| you know i like the idea of the muggle worl fining out about the wiserding world. I think it would be intresting if that happened in the seventh book. it would complakte things a bit. but hay without complactions you can't have a very good book now can you? |
Ari
Monday 26th March 2007 18:18 | The Vacation (Author Response) |
| Absolutely right. Thanks, Wolfsong! |
| Rebel_Dream
Monday 26th March 2007 09:36
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | The Vacation |
| Loved the story. I can not wait for the next chapter. |
Ari
Monday 26th March 2007 18:18 | The Vacation (Author Response) |
Sorry to disappoint, Rebel Dream, but this is a one shot, like all my Sentence Stories.
Thanks for your review. |
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