It's nice that Harry and Ginny have Remus to speak to about these things although it must be difficult for Remus to talk about since he lost so much when Lily and James died. Keep up the good work!!
I liked bringing Remus into this, to provide a connection between Ginny and the dreams. I really liked seeing Lily's anxieties about having a baby during those times, as that's something I've always wondered about. I thought you handled it well. I'm very curious to see where this goes.
Oh this is going to be rough. Remus knows something that won't make this a pleasant walk down memory lane. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p
Very nice. Poor Harry. He feels all left out. Also poor Remus, he is getting quite old I suppose. Although that shouldn't really be a problem other than the fact he is a werewolf. Anywho...keep it up.
Lils
Lady Chi Friday 23rd March 2007 11:41
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Very nice. Poor Harry. He feels all left out. Also poor Remus, he is getting quite old I suppose. Although that shouldn't really be a problem other than the fact he is a werewolf. Anywho...keep it up.
Lils
Yes, he is quite old. I've always assumed that being a werewolf would be physically tough, and things can't always go well for him. Harry's... well, he's Harry. It's hard for him to vocalize exactly how he feels, but he definitely gets paid more attention in the upcoming chapters. Thank you for your review!
"Babysittiung the crazy lady," eh? Cute. :-) Curious that Moony hadn't mentioned anything about Kathleen to Harry earlier....
Still quite well-written.
Lady Chi Friday 23rd March 2007 11:43
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"Babysittiung the crazy lady," eh? Cute. :-) Curious that Moony hadn't mentioned anything about Kathleen to Harry earlier....
Still quite well-written.
Hehe. I think there are a few of us who have felt the way Lily felt in this chapter -- out of sorts and out of control. Thank you so much for your wonderful review!
...where he’d been reading ‘What to Expect When You’re Expecting (The Magic Edition)
I know the Muggle edition was indispensible with all our children, but especially our first. I am afraid I went through it like Hermione does "Hogwarts, A History."
It is the nifty little bits like the above quote that make your story enjoyable. The subject matter is actually so sad... sigh
Lady Chi Friday 23rd March 2007 11:47
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...where he’d been reading ‘What to Expect When You’re Expecting (The Magic Edition)
I know the Muggle edition was indispensible with all our children, but especially our first. I am afraid I went through it like Hermione does "Hogwarts, A History."
It is the nifty little bits like the above quote that make your story enjoyable. The subject matter is actually so sad... sigh
I'm glad you caught the reference to that book. It's been the Bible for a couple of my aunt's who have recently started having children as well as some of my friends. What a wonderful guide, though! Wonder what's different about the wizarding edition... Anyway.
Thanks for your wonderful review! It's so nice to hear from readers who are enjoying and noticing things that I thought no one would.
