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Monday 14th December 2009 13:10

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

Toast and a Paper
Great twist at the end and really enjoyable throughout!
Snappy dialogue and good pace.
Tuesday 15th January 2008 16:00

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Toast and a Paper
ahaha!! I loved the ending!
Thursday 21st June 2007 13:49

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

Toast and a Paper
this is bloody briliant, I really loved that harry paid for his own valentine message, without knowing of course...
Thursday 25th May 2006 18:08

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 50

Toast and a Paper
Great story - I loved how spunky Ginny was and that Harry was her willing accomplice in not only hooking up Ron and Hermione but catching himself the girl.

This is going down as one of my bookmarked stories. I loved it. It left me w/ a great big grin.
Tuesday 12th April 2005 14:32

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187

Toast and a Paper

I read one of your other stories and had to rad some more.  This was fabulos!!I really wasn't expecting the ad from Ginny in there.  that was awsome.   I think I'll read some more.

levotatingT, keep up the great work

Monday 4th April 2005 10:14

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 510

Toast and a Paper
What a nice, fluffy bunny.
I like it. I like it that Harry got foisted on his own petard.
Typical Weasley, eh?
Kudos to you.
Thursday 6th January 2005 10:40

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 685

Toast and a Paper
Ronald Weasley... Kiss me now, or lose me forever. HG Harry was a little surprised; it was only a half-page ad. His eyes scanned farther down the page and he nearly sprayed pumpkin juice on the paper. That goes for you too, Potter. GW

Tuesday 4th January 2005 11:17

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51

Toast and a Paper

OMG this was sooooooo Funny!      

I loved it! I like how Harry was not even tempted to look at it!

Harry was laughing and snorting as well. "Happy Valentine's Day, Ron and Hermione. We thought we would do something special for you. After all, who doesn't want to share their first kiss with the entire school watching?"

I thought that was great but then .....

Harry was a little surprised; it was only a half-page ad. His eyes scanned farther down the page and he nearly sprayed pumpkin juice on the paper.

That goes for you too, Potter.


that was just too funny and such a surprise! But I could see Ginny doing that especially after the beginning of the story.

This was a great peice of work. Better than Love bomb because of the ending.

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