I really like the way the chapter ended up playing out - in particular. I'm so glad I wasn't drinking anything when he displayed his classic foot-in-mouth disease. Still, he does made me laugh. Keep going, Kathy. You're on a roll!
Wow! Back at school. That would be hard for people that spent the last two years fighting a war. That and a lot of students have missed those two years as well. Of course the Tri-wizard-tournament doesn't help things at all. I am sure one or more of the four are going to end up in the tournament. That most certainly means Ginny since her name is in the title of the story! How\'s that for deductive reasoning? Duh! Thanks for writing. I look forward to how you work out this story. p
I really like your pacing with character and plot development. Your chapters feel like 6000 words when I finsih them, and I think that is because I get into the characters heads and feel what they are feeling and therefore linger over every word and thought to just enjoy the moment. It is your Harry and Ginny that are doing that to me, but even your Ron and Hermione are so canon-like. I believe your summary suggest that H/G are going to France, so I suspect that R/Hr are going to get left behind.
I like the premise of this story. And I am wondering where your going with who is going to France and such and why they will go there. You have several hints in this chapter, but that could be a nice herring on your part. However, I am enjoying the interaction of the characters and the tension you have begun to develop. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Well, you've got me guessing. I can't decide if we're going to have an action/romance where Harry goes to France with Ginny, or if we're going to have an action/angst-fest with Harry staying behind with Ron and Hermione as Ginny goes to France without them. I'm sure the actual result will be some mixture of the genres, but I'm eager to see who stays and who goes.
Yay! another wonderful chapter. You know I've been following your writing for a long time now annd I love to watch how you've improved. You were always talented and now you are amazing.
I feel so bad for Harry, why does he always have to see things as his fault? Or see it as his duty to rid the world of everything. I'm glad he reallized that he deserves to be a teenager. So when does Ginny decide to go to the tournament?
Keep posting i can't wait to find out what happens next.
mhh now I am thinking if Ginny will throw her name into the gobelt or someone else! But it doesn't matter when she must attend she will get killed...by Harry! just a joke. but he will be really upset!! Hope you update soon! I particularly liked the end!
Excellent chapter! I think you captured Ginny and Harry very well during the feast. I like his inability to let go of his burden, and her talent for getting through to him. I loved her righteous indignation when he tried to forbid her from competing.
And, I thought Ron provided great comic relief by declaring that the Triwizard Tournament was no place for girls. I suspect Hermione really let him have it later!
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