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gymnastgal19
Thursday 3rd April 2008 20:24
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
| Adrift |
nice story!
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| BasketKiwi
Monday 10th March 2008 19:15
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233 | Adrift |
Wonderful details told with perfect, heart-breaking funeral numbness. I love some of the more random thoughts (ebony tears, the vampire in daylight, white toes curling in the grass) and the last sentence especially. Really well done!  |
| gymnastgal19
Saturday 17th November 2007 15:50
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Adrift |
awww!!! that is so cute!!!
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| Holly
Wednesday 4th July 2007 04:02
| Adrift |
| *howls* Very, very good! |
| critmo
Thursday 21st June 2007 07:36
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684 | Adrift |
| What a pity that Harry doesn't seem to hav grown up as much. |
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Wednesday 20th June 2007 11:48
| Adrift |
A very sweet, very moving vignette. Remus is such an introspective character, and you've managed to capture that beautifully here. I particularly love this line:
Children who really aren’t children anymore should have at least one more summer’s day like this one.
Well done. |
| Megan SQ
Wednesday 20th June 2007 07:02
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 61 | Adrift |
| I loved the tone of this story - gentle elegy, I'd call it. Some events are too big to comprehend at first, and people try to distance themselves by paying attention to details. Remus was doing just that, in his thoughtful manner. He also comes across as very lonely until the last paragraph. Great one-shot. |
| Cool
Tuesday 19th June 2007 21:20
| Adrift |
That was good. 3 and half stars? Are you going to write more chapters?    |
| ibelieveintruelove
Tuesday 19th June 2007 16:21
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 257 | Adrift |
| Oh I really liked this story, great job! |
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