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gymnastgal19
Thursday 3rd April 2008 20:32
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
| Reunion |
cute story!
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| BasketKiwi
Monday 10th March 2008 19:29
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233 | Reunion |
Ooh, that has got to be one of the most fantastic descriptions of the Burrow's kitchen that I've ever read! I really love your details. There seemed to be so much backstory, though. Is there really no hope for any sort of continuation...? Pleeease? Not that it doesn't stand well on its own, I was just hoping for more.  |
| gymnastgal19
Saturday 17th November 2007 20:04
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Reunion |
awww!!! so cute!!!! Im surprised that there was no kissing at the end lol
 
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| pyromain
Sunday 15th July 2007 11:48
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | Reunion |
| I really liked Ginny's reaction to him being "home" again. Wouldn't expect it any other way. |
| The Boss
Saturday 7th July 2007 01:34
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 214 | Reunion |
Yay, Harry and Ginny got back together, now lets just hope that that happens in Deathly Hallows
Excellent writing 
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| occlumens
Friday 6th July 2007 21:17
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 62 | Reunion |
| Awwww. Great job! Very believable. |
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Thursday 5th July 2007 20:33
| Reunion |
I can understand why it might seem strange and OOC for Ginny, and I'm sorry it upset you like it did.
BUT. The onions are complete and total crack!fic. The savior of the Wizarding World wouldn't normally be felled by a few pieces of propelled produce, would he?
Glad you liked it otherwise, though. |
| Lisa
Thursday 5th July 2007 20:13
| Reunion |
i found the story emotional. i feel like you are missing parts though? does harry and ginny ever kiss. i really would like to know.  |
| eekii
Thursday 5th July 2007 16:50
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 18 | Reunion |
A great start. More! Please?
Ed. |
| Patches
Thursday 5th July 2007 01:12
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1141 | Reunion |
| This is a good story. I like the fact that Harry finally comes home to Ginny. The onions were a nice touch although they were unexpected. Thanks for writing. p |
| Neli P
Wednesday 4th July 2007 19:17
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 49 | Reunion |
What Harry said to Ginny about missing home was sooo sweet  Lovely story, even though I have some hard time picturing anyone beating Ron at chess  |
| bonbon_13
Wednesday 4th July 2007 14:43
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35 | Reunion |
 Brilliant! |
| myketje
Wednesday 4th July 2007 04:11
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112 | Reunion |
So sereen and peacefull!! I like it very much. It's a bit short, but somehow it's just godd this way.
Thxs!!
Kiss Kiss
mee |
| ibelieveintruelove
Wednesday 4th July 2007 01:55
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 257 | Reunion |
| Awwww that's so sweet. And I love the onions idea, a perfect Ginny reaction, lol. |
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Tuesday 3rd July 2007 19:34
| Reunion |
Hi,
It was good writing (talent I don't have or haven't yet developed) and mostly in character and plausible.
However, if you'll forgive me for the criticism, I thought Ginny was a little too violent. I can see her hitting Harry with the onion or a hex, being angry and yelling; but when Harry lost consciousness due to her violence Ginny did not even seem worried that he might have a concussion. She should have apologized, not for being angry or hitting him once or twice; but several times enough to cause him to lose consciousness.
I just find it disturbing that she didn't seem upset that she hurt him so badly and didn't apolgize for knocking him out or see if he needed healed.
Maybe I'm being nitpicky but head injuries are serious...
Thanks for sharing your story in any case. :-) |
| Grandma Kate
Tuesday 3rd July 2007 12:40
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 959 | Reunion |
You've written a plausible homecoming.
Resting his head back on the wall, Harry smiled and let the smells and familiar comforts of home wash over him as Ginny nuzzled closer. It was good to be back indeed. |
| Lily Flower
Tuesday 3rd July 2007 12:28
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144 | Reunion |
| This is sweet and very nicely written. Brilliant job. I love the emotions and of course the onion fight. lol. |
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