Register | Login
Story of the Week: You Know Who's On First By Iniga  Image of the Week: Quidditch victory By AgiVega  
LATEST STORIES AUTHORS TOP 10
STORIES OF THE WEEK COMPETITIONS SEARCH

Reviews For Before The Beginning by Spinnet

Showing 1 to 15 of 15
gymnastgal19
Thursday 24th April 2008 20:57


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Before The Beginning
omg!!! thats so sad!! To think that that one decision to make peter their secret keeper lost them their lives
  Quote
jovelyn_mark
Monday 17th March 2008 19:49


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25

Before The Beginning
awwwww not i feel worse than before..... amazing story. That Petter!!!!
  Quote
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 5th December 2007 05:53


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Before The Beginning
Wow! This was really well written!
  Quote
STUFA
Friday 12th October 2007 08:23


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

Before The Beginning
ITS A EXELLENT STORY! THANKS....
  Quote
D.A.D.A.chik
Thursday 4th October 2007 15:13


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 93

Before The Beginning
OMG...this was an amazing story. I love the high pitched laugh...so real!
  Quote
DebbieO
Wednesday 3rd October 2007 16:08


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 79

Before The Beginning
Great job. A very believable and creepy scenario.
  Quote
RIPHedwig
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 11:29


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 210

Before The Beginning
*sigh*

that was really good.

but so sad.

i hate what happened to James and Lily. I read the chapter 'Godric's Hollow' of DH last night and cried my eyes out. You wrote really well, though.
  Quote
pixie7
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 07:10


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 138

Before The Beginning
O wow, poor lily.

thanks for clearing up how the switch took place.
  Quote
ktem1724
Wednesday 11th July 2007 06:11


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3

Before The Beginning
  Quote
ktem1724
Wednesday 11th July 2007 06:11


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3

Before The Beginning
  Quote
DeborahSu
Tuesday 10th July 2007 13:20


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 72

Before The Beginning
Well done! The emotion really came through!!!
  Quote
DeborahSu
Tuesday 10th July 2007 13:10


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 72

Before The Beginning
Well done! The emotion really came through!!!
  Quote
lantis222
Monday 9th July 2007 18:03


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 577

Before The Beginning
Oh No! They were so content, it's so sad. You did a great job, I liked it.
  Quote
pyromain
Monday 9th July 2007 12:08


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

Before The Beginning
I really like this explanation about how the switch was made.
  Quote
aurora luminis
Sunday 8th July 2007 21:50


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 31

Before The Beginning
This is powerful, very powerful. You have conveyed with painful realism all of a woman’s fear and despair at the ‘loss’ of a child. All of it heightened by the anticipation, the if and when of it. It is very daring to end it as you did. The perfect ending, the true-life ending, but still daring. The common urge is to turn to a piece that gives more comfort. This is more in the genre of cleansing… Well written, and given the time element, almost perfect. I would have found it helpful, more convincing, if the switch from Sirius to Peter had been given a fuller coverage. Kudos just the same!
  Quote
Showing 1 to 15 of 15
If you enjoyed this work, take a moment to review the story. Your comments are their only payment.
This author is not accepting unsigned reviews.
Login for signed reviews.
Latest Stories
Friday 10th October
Author: Caleb Nova
Story: Vis Insita
Monday 18th August
Author: St Margarets
Story: Mountains and Molehills
Thursday 31st July
Author: Wings
Story: Heart of Gold
Author: Arnel
Story: Ancestors
Sunday 13th April
Author: parakletos
Story: The Sins of the Fathers
Thursday 30th January
Author: Arnel
Story: Curing Dudley
Tuesday 24th December
Author: jedi34
Story: Flying Free
Sunday 15th December
Author: Author by Night
Story: So This Is Christmas
Sunday 27th October
Author: Antosha
Story: A New Life
Sunday 29th September
Author: St Margarets
Story: The Not-So-Newlywed Match
Author: GovCampbell
Story: Indefinite
Saturday 27th July
Author: Author by Night
Story: Thread
Wednesday 19th June
Author: Northumbrian
Story: First Sight
Sunday 16th June
Author: Northumbrian
Story: E.C.C.E.N.T.R.I.C.
Author: Northumbrian
Story: Tales of the Battle
Saturday 13th April
Author: Northumbrian
Story: The Mind of Arthur Weasley
More
Perfect Imagination: A Harry Potter Beta Reader directory.
Latest Art
Tuesday 20th January 2009
Artist: tripperfunster
Image: Lost Prophecy
Artist: tripperfunster
Image: Kitchen Argument
Artist: Hito
Image: Harry and Ginny
Saturday 10th January 2009
Artist: AgiVega
Image: Potter Cast Conquer Olympus I
Artist: GoldenSnitch33
Image: HP Art Project-Ch.23, OotP
Artist: mary-dreams
Image: Remus and Tonks - More Than Meets the Eyes
Wednesday 15th October 2008
Artist: bludgerbanger
Image: Wiinter Ginny and Hermione
Artist: bludgerbanger
Image: Bellatrix Lestrange
Artist: bludgerbanger
Image: The Silver Doe
Saturday 11th October 2008
Artist: Sanna
Image: Ginny Weasley and Harry Potter
Artist: GoldenSnitch33
Image: HP Art Project
Wednesday 6th August 2008
Artist: GoldenSnitch33
Image: Holyhead Ginny
Artist: bludgerbanger
Image: Ginny Sneaks Into the Broomshed
Artist: bludgerbanger
Image: Trio-Hats
Artist: bludgerbanger
Image: Notorious Mass Murderer
Friday 13th June 2008
Artist: AgiVega
Image: Lily For Ever
Artist: roby_boh
Image: 1st Year Luna and Ginny
Friday 6th June 2008
Artist: Rae F
Image: A Family Christmas

Help keep Phoenixsong Running - Donate

Harry Potter is owned by J.K. Rowling, Warner Brothers, and its various affiliates. Without the brilliance of J.K. Rowling, PhoenixSong.net would never exist. The stories we've published here are manifestations of our appreciation for the world that she has created. That said, all fan fiction stories and artwork published on PhoenixSong.net are copyrighted by the listed authors and artists and may not be published or distributed elsewhere without the express permission of the authors and artists.

Artwork for Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione and Fawkes banners created by ReallyCorking (c) 2013

The Admins of PhoenixSong.net, 2004-2007

Code ©Jeconais, 2004