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gymnastgal19
Thursday 24th April 2008 20:57


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Before The Beginning
omg!!! thats so sad!! To think that that one decision to make peter their secret keeper lost them their lives
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jovelyn_mark
Monday 17th March 2008 19:49


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25

Before The Beginning
awwwww not i feel worse than before..... amazing story. That Petter!!!!
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 5th December 2007 05:53


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Before The Beginning
Wow! This was really well written!
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STUFA
Friday 12th October 2007 08:23


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

Before The Beginning
ITS A EXELLENT STORY! THANKS....
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D.A.D.A.chik
Thursday 4th October 2007 15:13


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 93

Before The Beginning
OMG...this was an amazing story. I love the high pitched laugh...so real!
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DebbieO
Wednesday 3rd October 2007 16:08


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 79

Before The Beginning
Great job. A very believable and creepy scenario.
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RIPHedwig
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 11:29


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 210

Before The Beginning
*sigh*

that was really good.

but so sad.

i hate what happened to James and Lily. I read the chapter 'Godric's Hollow' of DH last night and cried my eyes out. You wrote really well, though.
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pixie7
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 07:10


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 146

Before The Beginning
O wow, poor lily.

thanks for clearing up how the switch took place.
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ktem1724
Wednesday 11th July 2007 06:11


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3

Before The Beginning
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ktem1724
Wednesday 11th July 2007 06:11


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3

Before The Beginning
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DeborahSu
Tuesday 10th July 2007 13:20


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 72

Before The Beginning
Well done! The emotion really came through!!!
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DeborahSu
Tuesday 10th July 2007 13:10


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 72

Before The Beginning
Well done! The emotion really came through!!!
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lantis222
Monday 9th July 2007 18:03


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 577

Before The Beginning
Oh No! They were so content, it's so sad. You did a great job, I liked it.
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pyromain
Monday 9th July 2007 12:08


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

Before The Beginning
I really like this explanation about how the switch was made.
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aurora luminis
Sunday 8th July 2007 21:50


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 31

Before The Beginning
This is powerful, very powerful. You have conveyed with painful realism all of a woman’s fear and despair at the ‘loss’ of a child. All of it heightened by the anticipation, the if and when of it. It is very daring to end it as you did. The perfect ending, the true-life ending, but still daring. The common urge is to turn to a piece that gives more comfort. This is more in the genre of cleansing… Well written, and given the time element, almost perfect. I would have found it helpful, more convincing, if the switch from Sirius to Peter had been given a fuller coverage. Kudos just the same!
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