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1: The First Step why are you re-writing the 7th book? much less with the same tittle.??? Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) quinnelin 1st year
1: The First Step Patches Hogwarts alumni
1: The First Step Hi Ari, Thanks for your review response! Yes, I know, you are very trying! I get it!!! Thanks for the comeback! p Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) No problem, Patches. I answer almost every review I get with words. Just part of being me. RaminGhauss 1st year
1: The First Step sweet story, whens the nxt chapter going to b done? Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) Patches Hogwarts alumni
1: The First Step A very good beginning to a different ending. Thanks for writing. I look forward to the rest of this story. p Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) You are very welcome, Patches. I try. And I'm trying. Get it? dude
1: The First Step awful Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) *flips hair* sunny
1: The First Step it is awesome Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) pixie7 3rd year
1: The First Step interesting start, different version of DH, but interesting all the same Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) Belthazor 1st year
1: The First Step You never mentioned Ginny? Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) Don't worry; She'll be there. Belthazor 1st year
1: The First Step Promising start. It is less detailled then it could have been. Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) Thank you, Belthazor. I intend to write more chapters in the future. prince 1st year
1: The First Step Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) Thank you very much, prince. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. satyaban
1: The First Step Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) Thanks for the review, satyaban. Narumi Hogwarts alumni
1: The First Step Hmm. Interesting. So what happened to the real Dudley? And why on earth would McGonagall feel the need to use polyjuice to make Harry trust her??? Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) All will be solved in due course, never fear. Thanks for taking the time to review! nihcyma 1st year
1: The First Step have to agree it's really an interesting start... Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) There's a lot more than 8 coming up, but I'm working with my new beta to get the next ones up asap. Never fear, i don't abandon stories, so you will get the next hit until it's finished ibelieveintruelove 6th year
1: The First Step Oh very interesting start, I'll be following this story to see how it goes Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) Well, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it! Tanks for taking the time to read it! WhiteWitch 1st year
1: The First Step This is very good! I especially liked the part where Harry exposed McGonagall . Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) I like that part too. Thanks for taking the time to review! prince 1st year
1: The First Step Im no expert in fanfic writing but shouldn't u but a disclaimer at the beggining of your story Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) Thank you for allerting me to that. I'll see if I need to get it fixed up. Kamalia 3rd year
1: The First Step Eeenteresting...a different version of DH? Harry seems very methodical and calculating. Can't wait to see more! Ari 1: The First Step (Author Response) Well, the first eight or so chapters were written, tryingto race Deathly Hallows out, but I lost a beta. Showing 1 to 18 of 18
It was started before the seventh book - three weeks before. This is what I thought the Deathly Hallows would be like. 
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