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J-TGriffy
Monday 12th March 2012 16:53
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77
| In the Dawn |
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| Dad
Tuesday 26th May 2009 12:38
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 464 | In the Dawn |
| I do not know how I got here, but what a brilliant litte stort. |
| Radiant_817
Thursday 19th February 2009 13:24
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4 | In the Dawn |
| i love this story so much, it's so beautiful and well, real. a lot of fics are great and funny and nice, but this one, it sounds like JKR herself and completely characterizes harry and ginny. please write more! |
| Kaspi
Wednesday 1st October 2008 10:36
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | In the Dawn |
I loved it, one of my favorite fics that take place right after the battle.  |
| GinnyBrown
Saturday 13th September 2008 14:08
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | In the Dawn |
| loved this update soon |
| joes12321
Thursday 24th July 2008 21:35
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 21 | In the Dawn |
just wonderful, wonderful reading. one of the few writers to really capture the essence of molly weasley.
write more! |
| rdprice29
Monday 12th May 2008 18:31
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 141 | In the Dawn |
| I so adore this story. The love that Harry and Ginny have for each other just 'jumps' off the screen and into my heart. Great job! |
| juliakissfreak
Sunday 11th May 2008 01:51
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | In the Dawn |
| write more!!!!! |
| FlittterKat
Saturday 29th March 2008 13:42
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 39 | In the Dawn |
| I loved it, such a sweet love story. |
| FlittterKat
Saturday 29th March 2008 13:42
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 39 | In the Dawn |
| I loved it, such a sweet love story. |
| eternal_twilight88
Friday 1st February 2008 02:32
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | In the Dawn |
omg i loved this story!!! good job!  |
| SavingSaturn
Thursday 3rd January 2008 10:39
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | In the Dawn |
| I love it! Mrs. Weasley at the end was so cool..I like the idea of her not knowing that Harry and Ginny had been going out. |
| chiantiqueen
Friday 21st December 2007 06:31
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | In the Dawn |
Wow!! Absolutely fab! For me this is exactly what I imagined would happen after the final chapter of DH before the epilogue. The way Ginny is so caring and concerned about Harry is so sweet and I just love the end of the chapter where Molly relents after seeing Harry and Ginny together, brilliant!
You have a lovely writing style and this particular story would not have been out of place in the slightest if it had been included at the end of DH. I really hope that you continue to write as I think it would be a waste if you stopped now. |
| manavijain
Saturday 3rd November 2007 09:33
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6 | In the Dawn |
| excellent story...ive red it bfore ...its one of da best..plz temme if ur plannin to rite more...deyr so cute...harry gin...lol..cheers. |
| itsme07863
Sunday 28th October 2007 10:56
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77 | In the Dawn |
| very sweet story loved it |
| damabeth
Thursday 25th October 2007 22:32
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 12 | In the Dawn |
| I loved it! More please! |
| pyromain
Thursday 4th October 2007 09:14
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | In the Dawn |
| this is a great story, loved the uncomfortable situations between Harry and Ginny. |
| farie
Tuesday 25th September 2007 14:17
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | In the Dawn |
| This was a wonderful wonderful story. I really liked Ron's line "It's just sleep, Mum. We need it." It said so much so simply. I really liked the flow of this as well. Nicely done! |
ColtDancer
Friday 28th September 2007 19:57 | In the Dawn (Author Response) |
| Thank you SO much. Even for such a short stint, I was concerned about writing in other characters..I struggled with making them "true" to themselves. I found it best to just let the lines come, rather than trying to think too hard about them. I am thrilled you enjoyed the story!! |
| Felix Felicis
Thursday 20th September 2007 17:10
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201 | In the Dawn |
What a beautiful story. You write with such deep, moving emotion that I really feel myself pulled into the scene. I can't say exactly how many times my chest tightened up reading this. The emotions were so close to the surface throughout.
All in all, this was very true to the story and to what they would really have been feeling. Your repeated descriptions of Harry's exhaustion were so real, and your depiction of Ginny's caring for him so honest, it brought back memories of times like that in my own life. That's a sign of a good writer: you make the reader really feel the story by touching them in some way that makes them associate what's happening with something in their own life. Either that or you describe it so well that they feel like they've had that experience themselves. I particularly liked the constant swing of emotions. They're exhausted but they're in love. They're remembering the fallen but they see hope for the future. Excellent storytelling! Thank you for sharing this with us! |
ColtDancer
Friday 28th September 2007 20:07 | In the Dawn (Author Response) |
I am left with my mouth hanging open...the response has been overwhelming and I cannot say 'thank you' in enough adequate ways. Every author hopes for reviews like yours! Thank you SO very much...I sincerely appreciate your feedback and knowing your thoughts and emotions as you read through the story. I am glad that some of the tumult of emotions I was envisioning actually came across - this was a MAJOR missing moment from the end of DH as compared with the "ends" of previous books, and we just didn't get some of that "recovery" we were used to.
I am thrilled you enjoyed it and am so very pleased with all the wonderful feedback. |
| lantis222
Tuesday 18th September 2007 18:33
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 577 | In the Dawn |
| Oh please write more I loved it! I think you've captured the feelings Harry and Ginny would have directly after the battle perfectly. I also liked how innocent and sexy it was all at the same time. Well done. Welcome to Phoenixsong I hope you stay around. |
ColtDancer
Friday 28th September 2007 20:08 | In the Dawn (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I would love to stick around...I would doubly love to write more...I'm just not very good with cultivating plot bunnies. I got lucky on this one. I sincerely appreciate your feedback! Thanks again. |
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