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gymnastgal19 Monday 26th November 2007 05:50 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 2461
| Lily's Discovery |
hehe cute severus really liked lily huh?
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| Saturday 6th October 2007 10:35
| Lily's Discovery |
... You seem to have a good feel for Lily's character!
I Totally agree! |
| Seedy_Bea Friday 28th September 2007 03:00 1st year Num. of Reviews: 2
| Lily's Discovery |
| This is so cool. Everyone loves me! |
| ibelieveintruelove Wednesday 26th September 2007 04:03 6th year Num. of Reviews: 257
| Lily's Discovery |
| Oh that was a good story! I love Lily and this discovery of her magic certainly filled in some gaps left by the book. Great job! |
Seedy_Bea Friday 28th September 2007 02:57 | Lily's Discovery (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much! This is my first ever batch of proper postings, I'm so happy everyone's liking it. |
| Lady Jae Wednesday 26th September 2007 03:37
| Lily's Discovery |
I totally love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| The_Critic Tuesday 25th September 2007 13:46 7th year Num. of Reviews: 302
| Lily's Discovery |
Awesome story, only complaint is the ending, which seems a little abrupt. Otherwise it is very wonderfuly well writtem, and completely understandable, (Atleast from our muggle point of veiw,) I also really love the confersation between Lily's parents.
Great Job!
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Seedy_Bea Friday 28th September 2007 02:59 | Lily's Discovery (Author Response) |
| Yes, I know! It was going to be much, much longer (I started it before DH) and then all my ideas got canonballed! |
| RIPHedwig Tuesday 25th September 2007 12:48 5th year Num. of Reviews: 210
| Lily's Discovery |
ahh that was nice and very well written. good to have something that makes me smile, not cry, for a change.
loved the last line:
"And the rest, as they say, is history."
i love how everyone knows what happens next - well, all those who have read DH - which is practically everyone, anyway.
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| lantis222 Tuesday 25th September 2007 12:30 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 577
| Lily's Discovery |
| Very good, I liked it. You should definately write more! |
| Spinnet Tuesday 25th September 2007 10:50 1st year Num. of Reviews: 5
| Lily's Discovery |
That was really nice. I wish it was more than this one story... You seem to have a good feel for Lily's character! The whole scenario with the mum was very realistic! Great job |
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