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Showing 1 to 6 of 6 Silver Phoenix Monday 9th June 2008 20:46 1st year Num. of Reviews: 4
Prologue This was a delight to read! I love the way that you've portrayed Remus and Tonk's friendship, Tonk's attempts at flirtation, and Remus' utter obliviousness. I especially enjoyed the line of questioning:
"And do you agree that werewolves are more likely than average wizards to suffer frequent injuries, requiring the copious use of healing potions and salves which further drain their already meager financial resources?"
Cute, funny, and cleverly written. I'll continue reading for sure.
SP
oompaloompa Wednesday 12th March 2008 16:27 1st year Num. of Reviews: 20
Prologue Gee, Remus. We'd think you'd be a teensy-weensy bit smarter than that, ya know!
Ah, well. Boys will be boys. jncarlin Monday 17th March 2008 15:09 Prologue (Author Response) He'll wise up eventually. The next chapter is now up. AriesGirl Tuesday 11th March 2008 12:53 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 134
Prologue clueless warewolves are fun. you made the first chapter make me want a second.
Great Job! jncarlin Monday 17th March 2008 15:09 Prologue (Author Response) I'm glad you thought it was fun. The next chapter is now up. The_Critic Friday 7th March 2008 09:16 7th year Num. of Reviews: 302
Prologue lol. Poor remus, so hopeless. lol! Poor tonks, poor, poor tonks. jncarlin Monday 17th March 2008 15:08 Prologue (Author Response) Glad you liked it. A new chapter is now up. Grandma Kate Thursday 6th March 2008 09:43 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 959
Prologue Clueless, but not hopeless, if he keeps smelling vanilla spice. jncarlin Monday 17th March 2008 15:07 Prologue (Author Response) Definitely not hopeless. A new chapter is now available. lantis222 Thursday 6th March 2008 07:24 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 577
Prologue i can't wait for an update! This is so cute. I loved Tonks teasing Remus. It was great. jncarlin Monday 17th March 2008 15:04 Prologue (Author Response) I'm glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter is now available. Showing 1 to 6 of 6