Hi! What an unusual and devious plotline you have! I'm intrigued and will be following this story. I wonder what will happen when they see each other at Kings Cross? Will the recognition be instant? Will they start talking to each other in dreams?
I like the idea that Love intervenes where Fate is unusually harsh. Will Death make an appearance also?
Keep going! You have away wiht words. I especially liked the first few paragraphs of your story - the phrasing and word choice was excellent.
Roisin
melkior Friday 28th March 2008 14:36
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I'm happy to hear that you consider my plot-line to be original. That's something rather hard to accomplish these days. You raise some interesting questions and some of them could be answered rather soon.
Oh, and hearing that I have a way with words is a big compliment to me, as English is not my first language. Thank you for reviewing!
wait- two things I forgot.
#1 FIRST REVEIW!
#2 ... you're the person who just wrote that awesome story about bun-bun? Sweet.
melkior Friday 28th March 2008 09:09
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First review indeed.
Yes, I am. Same person, different personality though. And just to make a point, I started working on Meddle months before I decided to do anything to Bun-bun.
lol. I Just happen to LUV Stories with H/G Soul-Bondie things. Only if they are written well however! Prolouge is conivincing. You will write a good story. Probably.
The_Critic Gives an order for more!
melkior Friday 28th March 2008 09:06
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I will write a story. Be it good or bad, I'll let you judge it. How's that?
More is on the way. Thanks for reviewing.
