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J-TGriffy Sunday 19th February 2012 17:37 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 77
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| Cirquedufreakfan Monday 24th January 2011 16:56 1st year Num. of Reviews: 25
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| Honestley I think McGonagall was worried about Ginny. |
| Cirquedufreakfan Monday 24th January 2011 16:52 1st year Num. of Reviews: 25
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AW! So Cute! You're right Fred does like attention. + well...Forever! |
| littl_nita23 Tuesday 21st December 2010 22:19 1st year Num. of Reviews: 2
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u deserve a cup of , and a new i really liked it |
| clare Saturday 21st November 2009 21:32 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 78
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| Oh you just have to love McGonagall in this. Great characterisation there and another wonderful story. |
Kathryn Tuesday 1st January 2002 03:30 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
| Danikay Wednesday 6th May 2009 17:59 5th year Num. of Reviews: 239
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Aww ^_^
I was kind of worried there at the beginning haha. We all know Gin can be as pig-headed and as stubborn as Harry.
I'm glad they worked it out though
Amazing!!
Cheers,
DaniKay
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Kathryn Friday 8th May 2009 22:11 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
We all know Gin can be as pig-headed and as stubborn as Harry.
Indeed she can, they are pretty well suited eh? |
| gymnastgal19 Saturday 20th September 2008 20:32 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 2461
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Kathryn Sunday 21st September 2008 04:32 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
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| blue_and_white_witch Sunday 31st August 2008 06:34 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 92
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| I really like this fic, especially the idea of Ginny's card and the fact that the Death Eaters knew about Harry and Ginny. |
Kathryn Tuesday 2nd September 2008 04:27 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
| Snowflake24 Friday 11th April 2008 07:25
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This story was lovely and well thought out. I had thought that the death eaters must know about Ginny and Harry, because of Malfoy, Crabbe, Goyle and various others. Wonderful how Harry helped Ginny (and I believe himself, lol) and how Arthur asked Harry for help- I'd have thought Molly would ask to be honest, but this works just as well, probably better.
Loved it! Keep writing! |
Kathryn Friday 4th July 2008 10:46 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
I'm positive that all the death eaters knew about Harry and Ginny, as you said the likes of Draco Malfoy are hardly likely to keep that information quiet, plus Voldemort can read minds. |
| DukeBrymin Tuesday 8th April 2008 14:00 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 109
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Well, rather angsty--not my favorite style, but good resolution. I have two quibbles, though:
1) Ginny seems to really make an about-face rather quickly--all-of-a-sudden she\'s happy. If she\'s been burying her emotions and working herself to death for so long, I would think it would have taken a little more conversation before she could break through that persona.
2) They hadn\'t kissed yet? No kisses after the Final Battle? I find that somewhat jarring.
Anyway, good writing, keep it up. |
Kathryn Friday 4th July 2008 10:44 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| Everyone has their own version of what happened after the battle and some how I just see that first kiss taking a while to come. |
| AriesGirl Monday 7th April 2008 20:10 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 134
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I loved this , and wouldn't change a word. Great piece of work |
Kathryn Friday 4th July 2008 10:43 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you, sorry for the latereply |
| Acciowand Monday 7th April 2008 06:04 1st year Num. of Reviews: 41
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I just love everything you write! The subtleties you use to convey the emotions of the characters are brillant. |
Kathryn Monday 7th April 2008 12:58 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
| pyromain Sunday 6th April 2008 13:07 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 580
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a lovelly little story, which I trully enjoyed. thanks to you and your beta's. |
Kathryn Sunday 6th April 2008 14:42 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| cheers |
| Kriti Sunday 6th April 2008 08:58 1st year Num. of Reviews: 3
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| That was very well written.....thank you for this fabulous peice. Looking forward to more of your work! |
Kathryn Sunday 6th April 2008 14:42 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
| The_Critic Saturday 5th April 2008 07:14 7th year Num. of Reviews: 302
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lol. you always gotta got Mcgonagall in there...
very sweet! |
Kathryn Sunday 6th April 2008 03:49 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| yeah Mcgonagall is great and you know she was not too angry with them. |
| Steven Carnell Saturday 5th April 2008 00:38 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 74
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| Good story, very well written. |
Kathryn Sunday 6th April 2008 03:48 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
| tknott Friday 4th April 2008 18:44 1st year Num. of Reviews: 18
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Kathryn Sunday 6th April 2008 03:47 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
| majolie Friday 4th April 2008 17:34 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 476
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| Nice. I really like that you called out the fact that there was no way the Death Eaters would not know she had been Harry's girlfriend. I love the books, and Harry, but I always thought that was an illogical leap to think that by breaking up with her she would be protected. |
Kathryn Sunday 6th April 2008 03:47 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
I really like that you called out the fact that there was no way the Death Eaters would not know she had been Harry's girlfriend.
I know, without too much thought going into it, I can think of at least half a dozen death eater children and Harry and Ginny hardly made a secret of their relationship. |
| SillyGillie Friday 4th April 2008 11:28 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 543
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Really cute story!! Aw I'm glad Ginny's alright now!
RESISTANCE : The Burrow, Ottery St Catchpole, England
Do you mean to say Residence there?
And this one:
"Well, Weasley." He was grinning. "I'd have do go with that look in your eyes that shows that you want to jump me."
I'm pretty sure you mean to.
Anywho wonderful story! Very cute and enjoyable! |
Kathryn Sunday 6th April 2008 03:44 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
I've pasted those comments onto my beta, thanks for pointing them out, you know what its like when you look at something over and over again you just miss the small things.
Glad you enjoyed the piece. |
| lantis222 Friday 4th April 2008 07:24 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 577
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| Loved it. Absolutely loved it. But then I love everything you write, you really are talented. Great job. I can't wait for more from you! |
Kathryn Friday 4th April 2008 09:50 | Disciplinary Cards (Author Response) |
| thank you |
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