Very sweet. I always liked the idea of Remus taking over the surrogate father role after Sirius died and was quite disappointed that this did not happen in the following books. Thank you for a little bit of that.
I enjoyed your entry in the Summer Drama contest so much that I wanted to read your other stories posted here.
This is a wonderful, lovely little piece – just the perfect amount of tension and sweetness, it put a big smile on my face. The thought of the previous night’s conversation is hilarious – I love the oblique references to the discussion between the two boys. Remus’ recollection of James and Lily was just lovely, and Remus himself was perfect! I adore the understated and effortless feel of this story, and I hope you decide to share more with us.