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gymnastgal19
Friday 26th October 2007 10:03
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
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WOW!!! this was a really good story! 
 
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| dcgirl
Saturday 4th August 2007 10:25
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 25 | Leave-taking |
| I really enjoyed this story. You captured being a teenager well. |
| Aqua Fountain*
Wednesday 25th April 2007 01:03
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132 | Leave-taking |
That's sweet.
He'd swallowed his pride, nearly choking on it in the process, and come here to beg her one last time not to go.  I like this line - the nearly choking part is funny.
I like how you made the first kiss not flawless - it makes the story more real. Did hermione use a Portkey to get to the airport?
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| Bryher
Sunday 18th March 2007 13:32
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 26 | Leave-taking |
Awww, that was lovely. Really liked your characterisation of Ron and Hermione. I loved the way Luna was singing Weasley is our king at that particular stage in the proceedings too... Thanks, Helen.gif) |
| XXXmister-E werepony unit
Sunday 23rd October 2005 08:16
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112 | Leave-taking |
| awe,so sweet
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MagnoliaMama
Sunday 23rd October 2005 10:27 | Leave-taking (Author Response) |
| Thank you!
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| jeanne
Thursday 14th July 2005 10:37
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 508 | Leave-taking |
| One of the best R/H ficlets I,ve read in a long time. I,m not a R/H.fan per se,but this was good.Poor bumbling Ron.Hand in the wrong place at the wrong time,but it was cute.Nice work. |
| Honeydukeschocolate
Friday 15th April 2005 21:00
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | Leave-taking |
 awwwwwwwwww *cries* |
| Thorfinna
Friday 5th November 2004 17:30
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | Leave-taking |
Ok I've now read all your stories (I hope, if you've any hanging out anywhere else, let me know!)
You're an excellent writer. I hope you continue to write in this universe. I agree with what someone else said as well, I'd love to see other stories of the Potter's 8 kids.
Tracy |
| catfood
Monday 1st November 2004 21:21
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | Leave-taking |
| This is quite beautiful! Very well done, and you didn't take the
easy way out by having Hermione decide to stay. I'd love to see a
continuation of this: perhaps a story of her return?
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MagnoliaMama
Monday 1st November 2004 21:21 | Leave-taking (Author Response) |
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. Hermione will return, though I won't be addressing that in another one-shot--Ron will have to wait until I get around to writing the last chapter of "Seo Gerecednis."  Thanks for writing! |
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