The story's going well, nice emotion in it, I especially loved 'Her soul was calling out with all her might', line, it brought tears to me eyes. Keep it going!
jedi34 Monday 22nd September 2008 11:34
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, sometimes I'm bit of a cheese ball. I'm glad you like the line.
The story's going well, nice emotion in it, I especially loved 'Her soul was calling out with all her might', line, it brought tears to me eyes. Keep it going!
nice cliffy..
i noticed that you seem to write "fist" instead of "first" a lot. Maybe you need a new beta... ( if you decide so, i'd be happy to help...) But seriously though, awsome chapter...
jedi34 Thursday 12th June 2008 14:25
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After reading your comment I went back and counted out of curiosity and I found 2 instances of fist in the story and 1 in the author notes.
I'm actually very surprised there isn't more of those, you should see my word docs BEFORE my beta's clean them up. *shivers*
In terms of spelling and catching things like that more eyes can't hurt. If you are still interested please send me a PM and we can discuss any help you might want to offer.
Another intriguing chapter. I'm still trying to get over my initial resistance to the basic premise which is biasing me somewhat against the whole story. However, your ability to write cliff-hangers ensures I will come back next chapter to have my curiosity satisfied. I am very worried about Harry's wiped out memories and the fact that he's not going to react properly upon seeing Ginny again.
jedi34 Thursday 12th June 2008 14:21
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Sorry it took so long to respond. I'm back now and ready to go!
I get that alot on the basic premise, and in all truthfulness I don't really disagree.
I guess I'll just have to keep writing cliff-hangers. If any one complains about the all the cliffs coming up, I'll just direct them to you ok?
In all seriousness, thank you for your comments and continued reading.
You have me intrigued. I would like to see a little more of what happened at the memorial. Good job so far.
jedi34 Friday 23rd May 2008 19:38
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I'll add some more detail in later chapters. However there are some things left intentionally blank for the reader to fill in for themselves. I can never write a scene as imaginative as something that many of you can come up with on your own.
AW come on!!!!! you can't just let it stop there!!! good chapter though
jedi34 Wednesday 21st May 2008 21:42
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I know, I really should have made this chapter longer and put more into it. Sorry for the cliff. Next chapter will be longer and have more to think about.
OhMyGod! Quick update!
I was thinking about half way through the chapter (with the present for Teddy), 'sob... this is heartbreakingly sad!' then Harry! mmm yay! B
jedi34 Wednesday 21st May 2008 21:39
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You know she had to find him sooner or later. I decided that it had to be sooner
OhMyGod! Quick update!
I was thinking about half way through the chapter (with the present for Teddy), 'sob... this is heartbreakingly sad!' then Harry! mmm yay! B
Ahh. Poor, Poor ginny. She'll be a bit upset when she realizes he doesn't know who she is. LOL. you have to update soon. I swear, I will stalk you to where you live, and sit as a zombie in front of your house screaming UPDATE. Or, you just could update. Noww...11/10. no, no.
13/10. Now update. Please! this is my favorite fanfic ever, and thats somthing because untill recently it was NoFP.
Pweaty Pwease Update?
:p
Critic
jedi34 Wednesday 21st May 2008 21:38
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wow, thanks for the review!
No pressure of anything huh? I promise I will try and live up to your expectations. Just remember this is my first story!
Seriously, thank you for such a nice review. I'm beaming!
No worries. Expect an update soon, mid next week at the LATEST. It will also be about twice as long. Sorry for the short chapters, but I'm just getting started.
, sometimes I'm bit of a cheese ball. I'm glad you like the line. 
