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nire135
Thursday 12th March 2009 11:46
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 28
| A Friendly Warning |
| lol. i love it. |
| gymnastgal19
Friday 22nd August 2008 11:13
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | A Friendly Warning |
hehe nice
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| snowflake24
Monday 23rd June 2008 09:41
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 39 | A Friendly Warning |
Lol! This made me laugh. I loved Ron barging in...to save Harry. I think Hermione and Ginny are going to have Ron and Harry wrapped round their little fingers  |
| Ginny WcPr
Friday 20th June 2008 17:26
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 9 | A Friendly Warning |
This is really good, comical, and REALLY REALLY GOOD
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| DukeBrymin
Monday 9th June 2008 14:55
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 109 | A Friendly Warning |
| Very enjoyable--nice humor, and great reunion between our favorite couple. |
| GryffindorGal87
Monday 9th June 2008 12:22
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 14 | A Friendly Warning |
| "If I get like that, please, slap the hell out of me." Brilliant line! I loved Ron's part! |
Carrick O'Rourke
Sunday 15th June 2008 07:57 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thanks, I love tha line!  |
| Patches
Monday 9th June 2008 00:46
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1141 | A Friendly Warning |
| This is priceless! What a great image to have of Ron's feelings for Hermione taking over his thoughts and trying to warn Harry about what could happen to him with Ginny. Very short but very impressive message in so few words. Thanks for writing. p |
| PhoenixFeathers
Saturday 7th June 2008 18:36
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 65 | A Friendly Warning |
Nice.... dind of the same thing that happened last time, but i like it... once again, nice
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| aharkins
Saturday 7th June 2008 13:00
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 176 | A Friendly Warning |
| I love it! |
Carrick O'Rourke
Saturday 14th June 2008 20:15 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
| The_Critic
Saturday 7th June 2008 11:42
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 302 | A Friendly Warning |
"I'm here to save you, mate. It's obvious by the way you look at her and touch her that you're in love and Ginny knows that. She'll wrap you around her little finger and control you." He hesitated a moment and then continued, "And, and . . . you'll love it. I mean, you'll really love it, mate. But then you'll stop playing Quidditch and doing other fun stuff and all you'll want to do is be with her and do girly things . . . ." lol. And then its "Ron, stop bothering them. I thought we were going to walk into the village this morning and do some shopping." Ron seemed to melt with her touch, got a silly grin on his face and disappeared from the doorway. lol... Nice Story. 9/10
 
Critic |
Carrick O'Rourke
Saturday 14th June 2008 20:14 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
| Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. |
| mischiefmanaged
Friday 6th June 2008 12:24
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 14 | A Friendly Warning |
awwww!
that was soooo sweet!
really lovely! |
Carrick O'Rourke
Friday 6th June 2008 17:18 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
| Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. |
| Zeta_One
Friday 6th June 2008 10:11
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 109 | A Friendly Warning |
| Enjoyed the story. Ron is right, Harry will love it! |
Carrick O'Rourke
Friday 6th June 2008 17:19 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
| Yeah, love does make a person silly and they wouldn't change a thing . . . I'm glad you liked it. |
| RIPHedwig
Friday 6th June 2008 07:40
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 210 | A Friendly Warning |
Wow that was so cute! Short and sweet!
B |
Carrick O'Rourke
Friday 6th June 2008 17:21 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
| I'm really glad you liked it. |
| RIPHedwig
Friday 6th June 2008 07:40
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 210 | A Friendly Warning |
Wow that was so cute! Short and sweet!
B |
| brios
Friday 6th June 2008 06:57
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112 | A Friendly Warning |
| Lol, that was funny to read, thanks for writing it, it made my day a cheerful one. |
Carrick O'Rourke
Friday 6th June 2008 17:22 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
| Thanks! That makes my day. |
| barbara
Friday 6th June 2008 06:22
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | A Friendly Warning |
| Yummy, delicious, scrumptious. |
Carrick O'Rourke
Friday 6th June 2008 17:23 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
| Thanks, I really appreciate that. |
| ngayonatkailanman
Friday 6th June 2008 02:37
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 194 | A Friendly Warning |
| Delightful |
Carrick O'Rourke
Friday 6th June 2008 17:26 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
| Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. |
| Grandma Kate
Friday 6th June 2008 01:29
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 959 | A Friendly Warning |
This is a gem. Ron's warning is the 'voice of experience'-
It's obvious by the way you look at her and touch her that you're in love and Ginny knows that. She'll wrap you around her little finger and control you." He hesitated a moment and then continued, "And, and . . . you'll love it. I mean, you'll really love it, mate. |
Carrick O'Rourke
Friday 6th June 2008 17:31 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Everyone knows that deep down Ron is noting more than a big teddy bear -- especially when it comes to Hermione.  +  |
| Arnel
Friday 6th June 2008 00:27
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 573 | A Friendly Warning |
| Oh, this is cute! The thought that Ron sought to warn Harry of the dangers awaiting him lest he fall under Ginny's spell is just priceless. Harry's response to Ginny made me howl with laughter. Great little story that gets . |
Carrick O'Rourke
Friday 6th June 2008 17:34 | A Friendly Warning (Author Response) |
Thank you so much. Okay, I'll have to admit (a little embarrasing since it's my own story) that I laughed my head off when I came up with Harry's comment. Thanks again.  +  |
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