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Steven Carnell
Sunday 23rd March 2008 06:01


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 74

The Patronus
Lovely bit of fluff! Well done.
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majolie
Monday 3rd December 2007 04:34


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 477

The Patronus
So perfect. Obviously, not how things ended up happening, but I love it anyway.
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gymnastgal19
Monday 29th October 2007 16:00


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

The Patronus
lol that was so cute!!! great way for harry to admit his feelings!

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KittyGirl
Saturday 25th August 2007 15:51


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4

The Patronus
That was a good story. even though it was short, it was sweet and romantic.
Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:30
The Patronus (Author Response)
Ah, my first posted story! It is really short, isn't it? Thanks!
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pyromain
Sunday 24th June 2007 09:56


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

The Patronus
thats cute and I'm sure she can do a patronus now.
Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:30
The Patronus (Author Response)
Oh, I'm sure she can too
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Sunday 13th August 2006 22:07


The Patronus
This is really sweet. Normally, I'm not too much into fluff, but this is cute.
Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:31
The Patronus (Author Response)
I'm glad you enjoyed!
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Believer
Friday 23rd June 2006 16:14


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 128

The Patronus
That's so cute!
Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:31
The Patronus (Author Response)
Thanks!
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Liz'M
Sunday 25th December 2005 16:17


The Patronus

Short, but cute.

question:if ur kissing, how can u be motionless?

Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:32
The Patronus (Author Response)
Answer: It wasn't supposed to be this big romantic kiss, just the kind of kiss where it's awkward and still, yet still enjoyable.

Thanks!
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levotatingT
Wednesday 25th May 2005 13:48


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187

The Patronus

Short but cute and Excellent!!!  Not expecting to be that quick, but it definitly works

Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back

levotatingT

Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:33
The Patronus (Author Response)
Writing back!!!

Thanks a bunch!
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critmo
Tuesday 4th January 2005 06:10


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 685

The Patronus
Cheeky, but funny - only a bit short.
Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:33
The Patronus (Author Response)
It is really short, isn't it? Thanks though!
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mary-v
Monday 29th November 2004 10:38


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 494

The Patronus

 Extremely cute! Just too short. *pout*

~Maria~

Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:35
The Patronus (Author Response)
Hmm, maybe I'll try to extend it? Thanks a lot!
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HPNana
Monday 29th November 2004 09:40


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 23

The Patronus

First time I've read any of your work. This brought a huge smile to my face. I am still chuckling at it and once I'm done with this review I am off to read the rest. Thanks for a short, witty and cute story. I really enjoyed it.

Best Regards,

HPNana

Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:36
The Patronus (Author Response)
Thanks a lot! I'm really glad you enjoyed this and I hope you enjoy the rest too!
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Thursday 29th July 2004 18:45


The Patronus
Midnight White
Saturday 25th August 2007 17:37
The Patronus (Author Response)
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Kelsey
Friday 16th July 2004 12:24


The Patronus
You know, this is really cute, but really short. You should have built more on it!
Midnight White
Friday 16th July 2004 12:24
The Patronus (Author Response)
Actually, this was supposed to be a pretty long story with a couple of chapters. But I started writing it, and writing it, and I didn't stop until it was finished. And, in my tiny handwriting, it was only one looseleaf page. Anyway, it just goes to show you that you don't really control what you write.
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