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Steven Carnell Sunday 23rd March 2008 10:01 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 74
| The Patronus |
| Lovely bit of fluff! Well done. |
| majolie Monday 3rd December 2007 09:34 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 476
| The Patronus |
| So perfect. Obviously, not how things ended up happening, but I love it anyway. |
| gymnastgal19 Monday 29th October 2007 20:00 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 2461
| The Patronus |
lol that was so cute!!! great way for harry to admit his feelings!
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| KittyGirl Saturday 25th August 2007 19:51 1st year Num. of Reviews: 4
| The Patronus |
| That was a good story. even though it was short, it was sweet and romantic. |
Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:30 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
| Ah, my first posted story! It is really short, isn't it? Thanks! |
| pyromain Sunday 24th June 2007 13:56 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 580
| The Patronus |
| thats cute and I'm sure she can do a patronus now. |
Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:30 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
Oh, I'm sure she can too  |
| Monday 14th August 2006 02:07
| The Patronus |
| This is really sweet. Normally, I'm not too much into fluff, but this is cute. |
Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:31 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed! |
| Believer Friday 23rd June 2006 20:14 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 128
| The Patronus |
| That's so cute! |
Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:31 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
Thanks! |
| Liz'M Sunday 25th December 2005 21:17
| The Patronus |
Short, but cute.
question:if ur kissing, how can u be motionless? |
Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:32 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
Answer: It wasn't supposed to be this big romantic kiss, just the kind of kiss where it's awkward and still, yet still enjoyable.
Thanks! |
| levotatingT Wednesday 25th May 2005 17:48 4th year Num. of Reviews: 187
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Short but cute and Excellent!!! Not expecting to be that quick, but it definitly works
Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:33 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
Writing back!!!
Thanks a bunch! |
| critmo Tuesday 4th January 2005 11:10 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 684
| The Patronus |
| Cheeky, but funny - only a bit short. |
Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:33 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
| It is really short, isn't it? Thanks though! |
| mary-v Monday 29th November 2004 15:38 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 494
| The Patronus |
Extremely cute! Just too short. *pout*
~Maria~ |
Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:35 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
| Hmm, maybe I'll try to extend it? Thanks a lot! |
| HPNana Monday 29th November 2004 14:40 1st year Num. of Reviews: 23
| The Patronus |
First time I've read any of your work. This brought a huge smile to my face. I am still chuckling at it and once I'm done with this review I am off to read the rest. Thanks for a short, witty and cute story. I really enjoyed it.
Best Regards,
HPNana |
Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:36 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
| Thanks a lot! I'm really glad you enjoyed this and I hope you enjoy the rest too! |
| Thursday 29th July 2004 22:45
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Midnight White Saturday 25th August 2007 21:37 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
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| Kelsey Friday 16th July 2004 16:24
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| You know, this is really cute, but really short. You should have built more on it! |
Midnight White Friday 16th July 2004 16:24 | The Patronus (Author Response) |
Actually, this was supposed to be a pretty long story with a couple of chapters. But I started writing it, and writing it, and I didn't stop until it was finished. And, in my tiny handwriting, it was only one looseleaf page. Anyway, it just goes to show you that you don't really control what you write.  |
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