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littlemissgloom
Sunday 20th July 2008 09:17


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

One Fine Day
aawww
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ibelieveintruelove
Thursday 17th July 2008 23:33


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 257

One Fine Day
Oh that was so cute!! Very sweet and the perfect amount of fluff! I loved watching Dudley get jealous lol
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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 30th October 2007 20:11


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

One Fine Day
lol I love this! If i had been ginny, I probably would have kissed harry just to get back at dudley :p

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Felix Felicis
Saturday 16th September 2006 19:38


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201

One Fine Day
I know I've read this story before. It's been a while and I'm surprised I didn't leave a review before. So here goes...

This is one of the best H/G stories I've ever read. I only wish it could have gone longer because I didn't want it to end. To start with, the idea of Ginny being set up by her family and friends to go collect Harry is great. Her insecurities as far as he's concerned are significant and her thoughts betray that through your writing. Then to have Dudley look at her that way was funny! At least he behaves like a typical teenage boy. The mental image of the three of them sitting and waiting for Harry to get his things was so funny. Ginny's so cleverly written there.

On Harry's side, your giving us his thoughts prior to Ginny's arrival helps fill out the story and lets us know how he really feels. It was quite enjoyable picturing their awkwardness on first seeing each other. Then when he gets dressed while she keeps her eyes closed, loved that. I can see him doing that, making her wait while he absorbs just how beautiful she is. It was sweet getting to see her through Harry's eyes.

The end was great. A few good kisses, a smack in the face to Dudley and smiles as they start their new life together. What wonderful fluff! Like I said, I know I've read this before and loved it just as much the first time, but now I'm telling you so. It was great!
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Uzamaki-girl
Saturday 9th September 2006 17:26


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

One Fine Day
^.^

Awesomely sweet.
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Novera
Thursday 29th June 2006 21:30


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157

One Fine Day
wow just wow
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Friday 9th June 2006 22:50


One Fine Day
Fluff Fluff Fluff...Very cute!
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anonymous
Tuesday 25th April 2006 03:26


One Fine Day
Well, I see why you warned that this fic was fluff in your description!

I enjoyed it, but have to admit that the ending was a bit (alright, extremely) corny (I don't usually like fluff, but I'm feeling kind of stressed at the moment so this helped to cheer me up a bit.)

Ah well, congratulations on an entertaining fic anyway.

PS: I loved the idea of Ron having a magazine called "Wand"- lol!
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Ron Obsessed
Sunday 29th January 2006 13:34


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 10

One Fine Day
I love it!
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cwarbeck
Tuesday 17th January 2006 08:45


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 64

One Fine Day
loved it.
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Kanely
Saturday 3rd September 2005 07:38


One Fine Day
I thought it was sweet.  And the end with Dudley was so funny!
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XXXmister-E
Tuesday 30th August 2005 13:51


One Fine Day
wow...realy good.*eats the fluff
10!!!! please make a sequal!(sp?)
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IHateSnakes
Tuesday 30th August 2005 07:20


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

One Fine Day
Cute!  Poor Dudley...
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Kaneley
Saturday 20th August 2005 06:55


One Fine Day
I thought that ine was so sweet, and the end.... I loved it!!
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Wednesday 3rd August 2005 15:36


One Fine Day
that was pretty good...hope that JavaScript:smiley(' '); and JavaScript:smiley(' '); end up together in the end of the series too
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Jake
Wednesday 6th July 2005 09:25


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 323

One Fine Day
Aww, that was sweet. I Can't believe I just used "aww" to start a sentence. Word of this never gets out, ok? I was reading a post on the perch and clicked the link as I somehow managed to miss the week when this fic was fic of the week. It was fun, keep up the good work.

-Jake
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jeanne
Sunday 12th June 2005 08:43


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 508

One Fine Day
I even like the reviews at the end., DITTO!!DITTO!! to every one except 1,and I won,t say which 1. I hate the Dursleys when they are being disgusting.
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jeanne
Sunday 12th June 2005 08:39


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 508

One Fine Day
For an H/G fanatic,this was brilliant.To see Dud.shown up was good. I truly enjoyed it.
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Lady Ginny Potter
Friday 27th May 2005 12:04


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 53

One Fine Day
That is brilliant...I mean just so perfect.  I'm in a really sappy mood and you totally made me smile.  My friend had already said that I was glowing today because of my smile and now I'm going to be teased non stop during lunch.  Thanks!
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Fuzzy
Thursday 26th May 2005 17:15


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111

One Fine Day

Beautiful! A great and wonderful story.

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