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Praeceps09
Thursday 16th July 2009 23:36


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 85

2: A Better Explanation
Confused on where this fic is going but am going to continue to read it.
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TangoCharlie
Monday 29th September 2008 07:10


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 109

2: A Better Explanation
Hmmm... an interesting alternative view of Harry and Ginny's relationship. I always figured that Harry didn't REALLY start noticing her until at least his fifth year, and up until then always just kind of took her presence for granted. That he became so dependant on her seems a bit funny to me...
Ginny's behaviour, however, seems quite true to what I would expect. She's reading a lot into everything, and getting caught up over-analysing things. There's a hint of jealousy there, which would seem right if she started getting an impression of high importance from Harry. I think it's typical teenage-girl-with-a-crush behaviour that every single thing she does is though over and deliberate, even when it comes to being distant... Very interesting indeed...
jedi34
Thursday 2nd October 2008 10:13
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
You're right on. I would say that normally Harry wouldn't have noticed her, but she was able to use he understanding of him (through the bond) to make him see her earlier. At least that's the theory I'm going with.
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VegHindu101
Monday 8th September 2008 12:57


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 52

2: A Better Explanation
Awwww. I was confused for a bit cuz I didn't realize she was sitting there thinking about memories. I like how they've become best friends. He'll need her more and more as time goes now. She'll snap him out of the misery he's feeling right now I hope. Poor Harry and his nightmares. And what's this? Ron and Hermione together?? How'd THAT happen?
jedi34
Tuesday 9th September 2008 14:15
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
Sorry about the confusion, I'm glad that it eventually made sense! Yep, one thing Ginny is good at is no nonsense cheer ups. As for Ron and Hermione...well I needed a convenient excuse as to why they weren't around that much anymore so I kinda coped out and just used that one. It's not going to impact the story much though so I think it's alright. I hope.
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snowflake24
Wednesday 30th July 2008 15:21


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 39

2: A Better Explanation
Awwww, the scene where Harry was crying was so adorable. I loved this chapter so much; I felt so bad for both Harry and Ginny. I think Ginny just had bad timing in her search for someone other then Harry's best friend. And Harry being alone, I'm reading a lot of stories with Harry being alone Keep writing, please.
jedi34
Friday 8th August 2008 18:05
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
Thanks! Harry won't be alone for much longer. How long he gets to stay with her is another issue. The calm before the storm I say!

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment.
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majolie
Sunday 27th July 2008 18:34


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 476

2: A Better Explanation
Some nice background info here. You've set yourself up for some classic angst. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
jedi34
Friday 8th August 2008 18:04
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
Thanks M! You'll be getting a new chapter soon. Thanks again for all your help, you're fantastic!
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GinnySavesHarry1998
Thursday 24th July 2008 18:23


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35

2: A Better Explanation
Hm, well I like the background information you gave, and I'm really interested to see where it goes now. It's looking like they'll get together earlier than they did in canon, but maybe not if Harry is all surly and also bitter about Ginny's perceived "abandonment."

All I really ask is that I don't want to see details of Harry with other girls, if you write that (but I'll be perfectly estatic if you don't ;-D) and I can't stand tragedies where one of them dies or something. Please tell me now if this is a tragedy, so I can spare myself pain. Pathetic I know... but I think real life has enough pain and horror. I don't like to read it. :-)
jedi34
Sunday 27th July 2008 13:29
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
I think Harry is in a rough place right now. I still see them getting together earlier than in cannon, especially since Ginny has some insights into exactly what Harry is going through.

This is not a tragedy. I am a big H/G person so my stories always seem to come out right in the end. Some bad things will happen, but I've already got a plan to make it right, so please keep reading and if you ever think its going to be too sad, feel free to PM me. I would rather share some future insights with you and keep you reading than have you not read at all!

Thanks for commenting.
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jakjakattk
Wednesday 23rd July 2008 18:30


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 40

2: A Better Explanation
That was a lot better I never would have thought that you have come up with a better we write. I am look forward to the next chapter.
jedi34
Friday 8th August 2008 18:03
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
Thanks for the compliments. You made me blush! I hope you're still reading, because for better or worse I'm still writing.
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EJH0904
Wednesday 23rd July 2008 17:16


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123

2: A Better Explanation
God, don't stop now!!! This is way too good!
jedi34
Sunday 27th July 2008 13:26
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
don't worry, I'm not going to stop. Hopefully I'll get an update out soon.

If worse comes to worse, I'm off my current assignment in mid August so I'll have ALOT more time to write
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lantis222
Wednesday 23rd July 2008 11:33


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 577

2: A Better Explanation
I liked the background story. Poor Harry, he really went through a rough year didn't he? It was even worse than what actually happened. I still can't wait to see where this takes us, I'm really enjoying it. You really are a very good author.

I hope you update soon!
jedi34
Sunday 27th July 2008 13:25
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
Thank you for reading and for commenting. I should have an update this week.

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saulick
Wednesday 23rd July 2008 10:46


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159

2: A Better Explanation
OK, so now there are two stories you need to update reguarly. good start, can't wait to see what is coming.
jedi34
Friday 8th August 2008 18:02
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
Thanks! I've seen some other comments by you, so I am really glad you're still reading. Thanks for the comments and the support. I really do appreciate it.
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Comet Moon
Wednesday 23rd July 2008 00:41


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 30

2: A Better Explanation
I think the brief recap was a great starter chapter last time.

It did add more body to the story, but now we gots ta wait.

Dems da breaks.

Still nice writing, look forward to more

Oddly enough I was just checking on your story on SIYE

Have a great day

Ja ne

Jim
jedi34
Sunday 27th July 2008 13:25
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
I know, I really didn't want to add other details but enough people asked for it that I thought to myself, "self, I guess you need to add some more detail."

Now thats over and we can move forward. Thanks for the comments.
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LeprechaunJV
Tuesday 22nd July 2008 19:26


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 131

2: A Better Explanation
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The_Critic
Tuesday 22nd July 2008 19:25


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 302

2: A Better Explanation
Alas!
Poor Ginny!!

I can feel Harry's confusion from wayyyy over here.



Great story.
jedi34
Sunday 27th July 2008 13:24
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
Thanks. Poor Harry, I always make it hard on him. It will get better at some point. Right?
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blue artemis
Tuesday 22nd July 2008 18:14


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 125

2: A Better Explanation
That was really interesting, thanks for the details.
jedi34
Sunday 27th July 2008 13:23
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
No problem. Hopefully I can get the story really going now.
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DukeBrymin
Tuesday 22nd July 2008 14:50


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 109

2: A Better Explanation
Wonderful chapter!! I just about cried for poor Harry, when the one person he could count on stopped being there for him. I don't know if I agree with Ginny's plan to distance herself from him so she can find herself--intellectually I understand it, and it probably needed to happen, but emotionally it just rips me in half.
jedi34
Sunday 27th July 2008 13:21
2: A Better Explanation (Author Response)
Thanks for the compliment. Harry had it rough, but I really think that Ginny had it right. If she doesn't know who she is apart from Harry, how can she be strong when he needs her?

Don't get too upset yet though...it might make it harder to deal with the next few chapters, mwuahahahahah (
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