Sappy can be a good thing - especially in a children's bedtime story. Shehu Rites may be a bit obvious but I think a lot of JKRs names are also a bit obvious. Remus Lupin for example.
I liked your story. I hope to see more of your work in the future. Thank you for sharing.
SeaNymph Saturday 9th August 2008 08:00
1. Courage (Author Response)
lol. I thought it was a little too sappy at first, then I had to go through it a couple of times, and I sort of got the feel for it. I'm really glad you liked the story, and thank you so much for reviewing!
Hmm..I don't know what to say to that. But I'm glad you liked reading it. I know that I could never compare to the wonderful works of Shakespeare and other great literary artists. They're just too good!