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Sunday 21st August 2011 18:06

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 60

1: After the Battle
Great chapter! Your characters are spot on!
Saturday 1st November 2008 18:34

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 191

1: After the Battle
Great beginning to the story, keep on writing!
Sunday 28th September 2008 19:11

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 109

1: After the Battle
At first I thought this chapter was moving a bit too quickly and only brushing over some fairly important events. Having finished it, though, I quite like the fast pacing. It kind of gives an almost-montage feel to it. I liked the combination of some serious issues (such as funerals, a trial etc), but also a bit of fluff.

I really like the moments between Harry and Ginny. It's good to see that they've still got some issues to deal with and can't just skip traight to happily ever after. A nice touch of realism!

I love the language you've used, and the finer details you've dropped in - it makes a big difference to the overall quality.

I'm looking forward to reading on...
Tuesday 23rd September 2008 12:55

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 172

1: After the Battle
A nice solid start to what hopefully will become a great story!

I though you handled the mix of drama, angst and humour very well!!
Thursday 21st August 2008 11:07

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 174

1: After the Battle
At least Malfoy is given a fair trial.
The Boss
Monday 18th August 2008 02:58

5th year
Num. of Reviews: 214

1: After the Battle
Great start - looking forward to a great story
Keep the chapters coming

The Boss
Thursday 14th August 2008 18:38

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 39

1: After the Battle
Nice story. Interesting twist, Harry being taken by a mob to make a speech. I would have like to have seen the speech, just to see how he got out of it. I like that you included Malfoy's trial as well. I don't think that's something that I've seen covered in other fanfics.
Wednesday 13th August 2008 21:08

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 66

1: After the Battle
This is a great beginning!

Hooray! + = happiness!

I liked the ending to the chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing this story unfold.


Monday 11th August 2008 17:21

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 195

1: After the Battle
Very interesting.
Monday 11th August 2008 16:03

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15

1: After the Battle
Great, Very Good!
Summer Daisy
Monday 11th August 2008 15:51

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 32

1: After the Battle
I enjoyed the Bargain immensely, so was pleased to receive an email informing me you had written some more fanfic.

This is going well so far -- I enjoy your style!

This is the first ffiction I've read for a while actually.
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