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J-TGriffy
Tuesday 13th March 2012 12:27
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77
| Making Lemonade |
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| Delfino
Monday 20th December 2010 13:25
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238 | Making Lemonade |
Reading this was like a refreshing summer afternoon. I could almost see the sunlight and the lemonade  Thanks for writing this! Very cute. |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 20th December 2010 15:57 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
That's quite a compliment given that it's the middle of winter--so thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this.  |
| bibliomaniac
Saturday 25th September 2010 14:16
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4 | Making Lemonade |
| i love this xD |
Lady Whizbee
Saturday 25th September 2010 18:15 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm so glad that you loved it. |
| hg4eva13
Tuesday 9th June 2009 08:50
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 21 | Making Lemonade |
               
lol, idk, i thot thy lookd funny! |
| Jai-kun
Wednesday 3rd September 2008 08:52
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 20 | Making Lemonade |
| That was nothing short of brilliant. |
Lady Whizbee
Wednesday 3rd September 2008 12:29 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
Wow--thank you!
I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reading! |
| aharkins
Monday 25th August 2008 18:21
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 176 | Making Lemonade |
I'll just go brush my teeth now before all this sweetness starts to rot them.
Thanks for writing and sharing and making me smile. |
Lady Whizbee
Tuesday 26th August 2008 04:08 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
Thank goodness because I certainly don't want to be the cause of tooth decay!
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| RIPHedwig
Thursday 21st August 2008 15:18
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 210 | Making Lemonade |
Awww lovely. Made me smile A LOT and wish that we had some of Ginny's heatwave here!
Sweet, I was hooked from your excellent opening sentence but as soon as I saw the words "James" "Lily" and "Albus". I'm a sucker for anything with the kids!
B |
Lady Whizbee
Thursday 21st August 2008 16:34 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
Me too! I love reading anything that depicts the Potter family.
I'm really pleased that this pulled you in, and that it had you smiling. That's all I could hope for! Thanks for reading...and here's to wishing you a little more summer heat of your own before autumn...and a cool glass of homemade lemonade to boot. Cheers and many thanks! |
| ninjapup
Wednesday 20th August 2008 17:54
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | Making Lemonade |
| I really enjoyed this story. I think this is the best grown-up Harry/Ginny fanfic I have ever read. Thank you for this story. |
Lady Whizbee
Wednesday 20th August 2008 19:23 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
| Wow--thank you! That is a high compliment indeed. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it as much as you did. The idea just grabbed me. I wrote it all very quickly, so I'm glad that it turned into something that so many have enjoyed. lol. Thank you for your kind words, they mean so much... |
| Astrid
Wednesday 20th August 2008 13:34
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | Making Lemonade |
| Adorable! I love the playfulness of the whole thing. Good work! |
Lady Whizbee
Wednesday 20th August 2008 13:55 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
Oh, thank you. I'm so pleased that you liked it. It's always fun to imagine what Harry and Ginny will be like as adults, and how they will interact as a family. I think this sums up all that I wish for them.
Thanks for reading, and for enjoying all the playfulness, too. |
| nickjgirl1
Tuesday 19th August 2008 10:28
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17 | Making Lemonade |
| realy good!i like when people write about and after dh. |
Lady Whizbee
Tuesday 19th August 2008 12:11 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
Me too!
I'm glad that you liked this. Thanks for reading! |
| sandyrah
Monday 18th August 2008 17:31
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | Making Lemonade |
This was just fun. I bet that Ginny makes Harry fix the second attempt at lunch though.
I love that she is able to remember the fun of summers, even if it did take a thorough soaking by sneak attack from Harry.
It was wonderful, just wonderful. |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 18:52 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. To me...or at least, what I was thinking in my head as I wrote...was that Ginny just couldn't place what it was that was making her feel restless (besides the unbearable heat), and Harry helped her figure it out by pulling her into the action. And yes, there's absolutely no question that Harry would be making the sandwiches the second time around! LOL
Anyway, I'm glad you liked it so much. Thanks for reading and for taking the time to write up such a nice review. |
| gymnastgal19
Monday 18th August 2008 15:30
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Making Lemonade |
nice story that was really cute
that would kinda suck though going through all that work for lunch and then it gets soaked lol
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Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 18:48 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
You know...I have no doubt that Harry would be making the sandwiches the second time around! lol. Ginny knows when to have fun, but she also knows when to stand her ground too! Though I think in this case, (at least in my head) I invision Harry making the sandwiches without even being asked.
I'm glad that you liked it! Thanks for reading. |
| lantis222
Monday 18th August 2008 10:38
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 577 | Making Lemonade |
| That was so incredibly cute. It reminds me of childhood and playing freeze-tag with my kids. Well done! |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 12:41 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
Perfect! I used those sorts of experiences of my own to draw on, so I'm happy that you felt it too. I'm glad that you enjoyed this, I had a lot of fun with it.
Thanks for reading!! |
| Emeralds and Rubies
Monday 18th August 2008 08:56
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 42 | Making Lemonade |
| Very sweet. I Absolutely loved it! Great job! |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 09:11 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed it. That makes me quite happy! Thanks so much for reading and for writing-up a reveiw, too. |
| brios
Monday 18th August 2008 08:45
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112 | Making Lemonade |
| Simply delightful! |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 08:55 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
| Oh good! Thank you. I'm so glad that you liked it. |
| DukeBrymin
Monday 18th August 2008 08:41
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 109 | Making Lemonade |
| Let me mention--the tears I said before, were tears of happiness, not sadness, so don't feel bad about them--it's really a compliment! |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 08:55 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
| I think that I instinctively knew that--but thank you for clarifying--I would hate it if they were tears of sadness! LOL. And thank for the compliment, I'm really quite flattered. |
| Jacynthe
Monday 18th August 2008 07:45
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 140 | Making Lemonade |
| I can see you're earning top marks at the St Margaret's Institute of Literary Fluffiness. Lovely story, sweet but not cloying. Just like the lemonade. |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 08:20 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
Lovely story, sweet but not cloying. Just like the lemonade.
*happy sighs*
Thank you. You're words are too kind, and while I'm far from earning top-marks, I am trying! LOL. This was a lot of fun to write, and the change in pov was an interesting challenge. I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much.
Thank you so much for reading, and even more for your very kind words. |
| saulick
Monday 18th August 2008 07:23
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | Making Lemonade |
| Awesome! Very well written and fun. Great job! |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 08:09 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
| Oh, thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun writing it. Thanks for reading! |
| SongBird09
Monday 18th August 2008 07:18
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 9 | Making Lemonade |
| wow cute story i like it |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 08:08 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
| I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. |
| DukeBrymin
Monday 18th August 2008 05:44
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 109 | Making Lemonade |
Well, not one to readily admit to being emotional, it is somewhat surprising for me to write that this one moved me to tears. The slice-of-life (no pun intended) view of finding joy with one's children and spouse just really hit home with me. Very well-written, capturing Ginny's restlessness and then her pure joy in her family--deserves to be widely-disseminated to those who haven't been able to find happiness in their families recently.
Superb effort!
My only comment is that freckles aren't usually transparent. That section might be worded slightly differently: ...her freckles shine spectaculary through her now-transparent white dress... |
Lady Whizbee
Monday 18th August 2008 08:06 | Making Lemonade (Author Response) |
Oh, wow...while I'm quite sad that this story provoked any tears from you, I am pleased that you found it so moving. That's quite thrilling for any writer.
Everyone deserves their own brand of H/G happiness, and while this particular family is completely imaginary--I do hope that most families have these sorts of joy-filled moments from time to time.
Thanks for pointing out the 'transparent freckles'--lol--I'll have to fix that!
I'm so glad that you found my little story. Thank you for reading it, and for enjoying it as much as you did. All my best. |
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