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aharkins Thursday 18th December 2008 12:06 4th year Num. of Reviews: 176
| Blasting Beans and Babbling Buttons |
This is a good memory of Fred. And you're not the only one who's sad that he died. Thank you for writing and for sharing your work.
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SeaNymph Saturday 27th December 2008 14:24 | Blasting Beans and Babbling Buttons (Author Response) |
Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed this one! |
| Ladybug Tuesday 16th December 2008 21:37 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 375
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Great! Great! Great! It's happy hilarity and hi-jinx like this that are the best kind of remembrance for a character like Fred. I liked it very much - in particular, this little bit made me laugh:
And besides, Ron’s your little brother; I’m your big brother.
Enjoyed the fluffiness, too - poor Ginny - but she's got a pretty powerful will on her to limit the damage of that Babbling Button like she did. |
SeaNymph Wednesday 17th December 2008 12:29 | Blasting Beans and Babbling Buttons (Author Response) |
Thanks! I'm glad my hard work really paid off with this one, I'm not really comfortable writing comedy lines like that, so I wrote whatever came to mind, and I'm glad to see it worked! And we all know Ginny can do whatever she wants with that superstrong willpower of hers  |
| Joan Glover Sunday 14th December 2008 07:38 1st year Num. of Reviews: 8
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| Thank you, SeaNymph, I enjoyed/am enjoying you story. But I have one question: in the first paragraph, you use the word,"altercation." An altercation is a fight, usually a verbal fight. I wondered if the word you intended had been alteration, a change? Joan Glover |
SeaNymph Tuesday 16th December 2008 11:39 | Blasting Beans and Babbling Buttons (Author Response) |
Whoops! You're right! So sorry about the mistake, I read the story so many times, and I still overlooked it.
I'm glad you enjoyed reading it though, and that mistake didn't turn you away! Thanks for the review  |
| Dad Saturday 13th December 2008 06:53 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 463
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Happy story........
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SeaNymph Tuesday 16th December 2008 11:40 | Blasting Beans and Babbling Buttons (Author Response) |
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it  |
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