Wow, Scorpius kind of sounds like Harry, when he first arrived at Hogwarts I mean- but Harry was nice. Lol, excellent start!
James seems like a git, almost like Ron actually, but Al is soo Harry's son lol, and wow, Rose totally seems like Hermione. Great work!
I cannot wait to see what you have planed for this story!
I'm so looking forward to reading more! I feel bad for Scorpius and can't wait to see which house he gets sorted into--please say we will get to see the conversation between the Sorting Hat and Scorpio! I've enjoyed your other stories, and am excited you are posting a new one: thank you!
Worldmaker Saturday 25th April 2009 20:01
1: Here Begins a New Life (Author Response)
The third chapter is entitled "The Sorting of Scorpius Malfoy". So, yes, you will see the conversation between the Sorting Hat and Scorpius. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Yay, I'm hoping this is going to be multi-chaptered...? I was feeling in the modd for some HP last night, so read the epilogue which, as always, made me want more material on the new generations of Weasleys and Potters and Malfoys... And here it is!
Really good, well-written but my heart did break a bit for poor Scorpius!
Nice start, good topic. A tiny quibble -- Albus seems awfully good at standing up to a brother who is considerably older (at least it seems that way when you're 11), which doesn't quite match the little glimpse of them all we get on the platform in JKR's epilogue. But, hey, he's yours now, do as you will.