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The Boss
Wednesday 19th May 2010 04:50

5th year
Num. of Reviews: 214

1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In
Great start to the story - really looking forward to reading the following chapters. I like the use of the vibrating spell to wake Wormtail up.
Keep up the good work

The Boss
Wednesday 9th December 2009 17:44

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 26

1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In
Wow...I love the way you write. Each and every word that you use flows so easily...I envy you and your writing, lol. I hope you don't find that rude, I definitely mean that as a complement.

I like the way you've expressed Lily's hesitancy most of all, I think. All the characterizations are very well done! Great job on this story, I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Zia Montrose
Thursday 10th December 2009 08:49
1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In (Author Response)
Oh, I definitely take it as a compliment! Thank you for such a wonderful review.

I'm glad you mention Lily's hesitancy. It's sometimes hard to write that sort of thing, as, in this case, it uses little dialog and relies more on silence and body language and those can be hard! I'm glad to hear it worked.

I look forward to posting the rest. Thanks for reading!
St Margarets
Tuesday 10th November 2009 15:50

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 55

1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In
What a vivid opening of a lazy Saturday. I like how you incorporated some new canon into this - like Sirius's posters.

This is a great line that encapsulates that teenage enthusiasm:

Gryffindor girls... Swimming… A flash of spring fever flared in James’s chest.

Zia Montrose
Tuesday 10th November 2009 19:09
1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In (Author Response)
Hi Mary! I always try for vivid so I'm glad to hear it came across that way.

Sirius's posters just fit the occasion too well for me to leave out. I have to steal my previous reviewer's line and say there's "nothing like girls in swimsuits to motivate."

Thanks so much for your review!
Saturday 31st October 2009 02:27

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1157

1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In
Ahhh! The boys have incentive to get up and get moving. Nothing like girls in swimsuits to motivate! I look forward to more. Thanks for writing. p
Zia Montrose
Saturday 31st October 2009 08:57
1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In (Author Response)
Nothing like girls in swimsuits to motivate!

*snickers* Yes, exactly! Thank you for review. I'm happy to hear you're enjoying following the boys along on their Saturday antics.
Friday 25th September 2009 03:00

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1157

1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In
This is a great image of a day in the Marauders life! I can see the 4 boys showing off for the "Griff girls"! A fun day for teenagers. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more. p
Zia Montrose
Friday 25th September 2009 17:24
1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In (Author Response)
This is a great image of a day in the Marauders life!

I'm so glad you think so! As the author, the upcoming Ch3 (in beta at present) is my favorite, so I hope you'll stay tuned for it. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed.
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