what a way for Ginny to meet Harry! Horrible but I certainly hope they make up sometime in the near future.
Also I feel as though I have read this somewhere else or something like it, have you posted any other fanfiction on any other sites as this is certainly good writing!
The Boss
jedi34 Thursday 28th October 2010 06:40
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Hi! Thanks for the review and the kind thoughts. I post all my stories here and at SIYE. I have one completed and two in progress.
Hmmm, I always wonder on stories like this what the back story is, since it is different from cannon. Any chance you are going to fill in a few of the details? This is a good beginning, I see you still like causing as much havoc as possible in the lives of your characters!
jedi34 Thursday 3rd December 2009 09:44
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You know me, any excuse for some drama
As for the backstory, I'm planning on explaining it more when Harry and Ginny really start talking to each other. They will have to tell each other kinda where they are coming from, and I hope to use that fill in some blanks.
Oh but how I hate myself for beginning to read a new uncompleted fic. This is something I rarely ever do unless I know the track record in completed fics of the author. Your excuse for starting another fic because you are unable to get your muse working on another unfinished one, rather bothers me. This was an excellent chapter. Well written, and ended rather dramatically. I will wait until I see this completed before I tune in again. Good luck.
jedi34 Monday 30th November 2009 07:20
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Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you did read it even if you aren't coming back until it's finished. Clarification on my other fic however, it's not that I don't have my muse or that I don't know where the story is going, I actually have a fairly detailed outline of the entire story. It just takes longer to write a chapter of LaS than it does for Flying Free. I have to be more careful with the timeline and the characters. Regardless it was taking me longer than I thought to turn out chapters on LaS. I had originally wanted to wait on this story until it was done, but I decided to go ahead. Flying Free is a much easier story to write. Work will continue on both and I hope you will read them when then are finished.
Cheers,
Andy
Harry shouting at Ginny! I can see this ending with Ginny married to a motor mechanic and Harry going out with a page three girl with magically enhanced breasts.
Good start.
jedi34 Wednesday 25th November 2009 19:13
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Magically enhanced breasts, I love it! I might steal that idea, look for it in an upcoming chapter
Fantastic start! I love the AU, can't wait to see where it leads.
jedi34 Wednesday 25th November 2009 07:26
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Thanks! My wife and I are driving cross country today, I'm going to try and put the finishing touches on chapter 2 in the car when I'm not driving. Have a good Holiday!
Thanks! It's not quite writers block, but I'm having more difficulty than I would like with my other story. So here I am with Flying Free. I had planned to do this later, but I just couldn't wait anymore! I"m glad you like it so far, thanks for reviewing.
what a way for Ginny to meet Harry! Horrible but I certainly hope they make up sometime in the near future.
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