Btw, my previous comment and your response has a date of 3rd January 2002. Looks like we had that conversation about updating story long before story was posted D
jedi34 Wednesday 30th December 2009 21:36
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I noticed the data. Threw me for a loop for a bit when I was trying to respond. As for updating, my beta submitted chapter 3 today to PS so it should be up shortly (I'm not sure how long it takes to go through the process before it's available).
Cheers and happy new year
Ginny has really got a mad on about Harry. I'm sure if she talked to him she just might change her mind but she is really stubborn. I look forward to the rest of this game. Harry just might catch the snitch and cause an upset. Then we will see what happens from there. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p
jedi34 Sunday 13th December 2009 07:03
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Thank you for the review. I'll give you a hint about Chapter 3, Ginny meets Harry face to face
As for how Harry does in the game, Chapter 3 will be coming out shortly.
This is a really good story, but there is a bit too much Quidditch in it...maybe a little less would flow the story a bit more. But I like the antaganism (sp?) between Ginny and Harry.
jedi34 Sunday 13th December 2009 07:02
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Hey, glad you like it so far. I'm sorry to tell you, but I think the Quidditch is going to stay as a prominent part of the story (now there WILL be much more Harry/Ginny interaction). Part of the reason I wanted to write this story was to write a more in-depth Quidditch story. I hope it doesn't annoy you too much!
a bit of a cliffy here . Good job, waiting for next chapter .
jedi34 Sunday 13th December 2009 07:01
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Thanks! If you've read my other stories you'll find that I have a bit of a compulsion to write cliff hangars . Next chapter is almost done and shouldn't be too much longer.
nice work. i realy like where you going. and your qudditch games are actually fun to read - keep up the goo work.
jedi34 Friday 4th December 2009 17:14
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Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like the Quidditch parts, those are actually my favorite parts to write. Thank you again, I really love to read reviews from folks to see what they think.
GREAT STORY!! The humor and the comic situations are great, I was laughing out loud when I read Ginny's response to Harry. I think the quidditch scenes and strategies are well-written, I have never read a story that had such in-depth strategy before and it is fantastic. I did spot a couple of spelling errors but overall well-written. Please continue.
jedi34 Friday 4th December 2009 17:13
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Thanks for the support! I've tried to put some real thought into the quidditch. How I would actually coach it etc. I'm glad you like it. I'm working on chapter 3 now. Thanks again.
Nice follow up. Your Ginny seems to be a little unforgiving...yes? Still a good chapter with good character definition. Looking forward to the rest.
jedi34 Thursday 3rd December 2009 09:45
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I do tend to write Ginny as stubborn with a wicked temper. Having said that, she WAS embarrassed nationally by her hero. I'm not an 18 year old girl, but you have to think the reaction might be a bit...extreme.
I know! It's almost done, I promise! I'm starting vacation on Monday so if it's not finished this weekend I'll make sure I get it to my beta by Monday. Scouts honor. Thanks for keeping me honest
and of course harry catches the snitch, apologizes to ginny and they all live happily ever after 
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