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kash2210
Friday 17th October 2008 05:12


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 172

2: Making Plans and Finding Feelings
A really good chapter, the opeing paragraphs were particularly good. Loved the way & , 'played' together. Nice also to see that & , getting together!!

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TangoCharlie
Friday 3rd October 2008 02:07


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 109

2: Making Plans and Finding Feelings
The first couple of sentences in this chapter were fantastic!! The language was easy-going, not overly complex, but still very descriptive and enjoyable to read. The scene with Harry and Ginny in the kitchen was very sweet.
I had to giggle at their reaction to being scolded by Mrs Weasley - Freudian maybe?!?
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VegHindu101
Tuesday 26th August 2008 09:51


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 52

2: Making Plans and Finding Feelings
Hmm... interesting. Time travel.
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Prongs739
Friday 22nd August 2008 03:17


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 174

2: Making Plans and Finding Feelings
Well that wish was as descriptive as you can get. Very nice chapter.

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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 19th March 2008 01:53


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

2: Making Plans and Finding Feelings
huh thats interesting... so they go back in time.... i wonder how harry will act
wont they be under the fidilus charm already??
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daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 31st May 2006 12:43


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230

2: Making Plans and Finding Feelings
Nice. I have no other way to decribe the chapter but 'nice'.
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critmo
Monday 14th November 2005 23:47


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 685

2: Making Plans and Finding Feelings
That leaves a few things open to interpretation .... - Has it ever occurred to them to give the stone back to Dumbledore? After all, it belongs with the sword.
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Kelleypen
Wednesday 23rd February 2005 11:09


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416

2: Making Plans and Finding Feelings
Nice little roll down the hill . . . I don't think Ginny would have known about the time turner though.
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