ive been reading your story for the last 3 books before this..and i must say that u have peaked with this one...i know i keep saying the same thing...but what else am i supposed to say..both the chapters were absolutely brilliant..so engaging and so well handled..i just love the way you take care of every small little detail and never waver too far away from cannon and still make the story so interesting...all i can say is that im really hooked on to this one(badly..!!) ..so cant wait for your next update..so please update as fast as possible ..ur work is just excellent and mindblowing..!!
This is really good. I'm glad Adam has decided to keep his real identity a secret for now. I am also glad that he told Ginny and she agrees that it should be their secret. I love the way that Ginny took the news. That was really good. Adam (Harry) now knows she really cares for him! Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p
Yay! Two Chapters! (And they're good ones!)
I love the way we can see just how everyone seems to think at the moment, but I just can't wait for Adam's real identity to become public! It will, in the end, won't it?
Can't wait for the next installment!
Bear Wednesday 17th March 2010 02:25
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Thanks! I'm afraid I'm not going to comment on the future plot
you've fit everything together in a bit better fashion than JKR did. This story still has enough angst, without the bitterness of having him fostered with the Dursley's. Harry has grown up better and stronger. in the few years he has been at school.
Also we have a better idea of Riddle and his actions.