-- I guess we have different definitions of what a healthy size is, Aunt Petunia
no one else he knew shared his initial
-- you forgot Hagrid, Hannah (Abbott)
So Wormtail is haunting Privet Drive, but I though Voldemort couldn't access the place because of the blood protection. And what is the significance of the black lily? And where are the watchers -- not much good if the don't notice Pettigrew leaving the flower in plain sight
A few things I like to say, the first is with the spelling... I'm not good at it, but I know not to make mistakes with th and s like you do. For exmpal, (see my spelling is bad too) with Thothe and thtupid, they meant to be Those and stupid.
But for that, it was a good start to the story, and I hope you keep up with the good work.
So what is it with Peter Pettigrew, why was he there for?? And what is it about the black lily??
Your's Dragen.
Myth & Legend Friday 31st March 2006 07:37
1: Silver and Black (Author Response)
Hi Dragon,
Those spelling mistakes are intentional to show Tonks' lisp. She's posing as a five year old girl, who, in this case, has a lisp.As a result all her "s's" of at least some of them, will come out as a "th" sound.
Bummer!
I just went to fanfiction to get my old review for chapter 1. I figured I could cut and paste my way in to extra points. I almost have enough for a toaster.
Now that I'm thinking about it, I'll bet there were lots of reviews even more eloquent than mine. Certainly with more words.
That's one good thing about having CRS. I get to read the really great stories more than once. I know I'm going to enjoy this.
GryffRavHuffSlythendor Sunday 10th July 2005 05:51
1: Silver and Black
Oh no, this was written before Eternity Lost...you should really put a mention in the summary of EL.
Myth & Legend Sunday 10th July 2005 05:56
1: Silver and Black (Author Response)
Thanks for all your reviews, it really means alot to me :) I'm sorry
that you got to Eternity Lost first. I do say at the very beginning of
the Eternity Lost summary "Sequel to Shadows of Silence", but it's
easily missed.
I hope you still enjoy it, even if it is slightly out of context.
The story (and its sequel) are SO good. And the funny thing is, I can't point to exactly what in particular makes it good. It just is. I'm glad I saw it on the Perriverse recs.
