I really am enjoying your storyline; this is fantastic!
You keep mixing in a good amount of activity with the group at Hogwarts along with Adam & Ginny's exploits that help paint a larger picture of everything going on. The scene with Ron, Neville and Luna, her already realizing the boys had something else going on, was great!
I really liked the way you ended the chapter. Not only for Adam(Harry) to ease Mr. Weasley's mind and give him something to report back to the family; but for Adam's moment of reflextion after the reunion. We all have moments of 'What if...' and I thought that was a great way to close the chapter, by adding one more aspect we may have forgotten about over the course of your tale.
duuude! "He only asked us to look for things in Hogwarts, and the diadem hasn't been at Hogwarts for years." tell me they will say this to Harry and Ginny! pleaaase... and that's how they're gonna try to take something from Snape's office.. nice... Next chapter preparations o Askaban? or the trip already? can't wait
This is a good chapter but a little frustrating. Ron and Neville of course don't know the significance of Hufflepuff's cup or Ravenclaw's diadem. Ron blurting out his question was bad. I hope Harry can communicate with the Grey Lady. She certainly won't tell them anything with Ron there. Harry and Ginny's plan to talk to Mr. Weaseley was very good. I'm glad Harry told Mr. Weaseley who held him up at the gate to the Burrow. That was a good piece of work on Ginny's part. I hope they discover where the diadem is. Is the cup in the Lestrange vault as it was in cannon? I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p
Bear Wednesday 12th January 2011 15:21
12: Eleven (Author Response)
Thanks! It is awfully frustrating, but then I think that's part of the problem. Harry/Ginny are keeping a lot to themselves and that could come back to bite them.