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Sunday 17th July 2011 07:09

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Becoming Mrs. Malfoy: Adjustments and Worries
Really enjoyed this story, hope you decide to do a sequel/continue it! Great to hear from Narcissa's point of view also
Wednesday 8th June 2011 11:06

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 490

Becoming Mrs. Malfoy: Adjustments and Worries
What a lot of potential. It is a scene setter and there is a whole story to be told here from Narcissa`s point of view. Right up to the final battle in fact.
Wednesday 8th June 2011 11:11
Becoming Mrs. Malfoy: Adjustments and Worries (Author Response)
Thank you. I'm not sure I'm ready for the scope of retelling all of HP from Narcissa's POV, but it would be an interesting read.
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 7th June 2011 04:33

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 966

Becoming Mrs. Malfoy: Adjustments and Worries
Your story fills in the back story well. This made me shiver-
Snape owes us both," she whispered, letting her head sink heavily into the pillow.
Wednesday 8th June 2011 10:26
Becoming Mrs. Malfoy: Adjustments and Worries (Author Response)
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I've always thought there was a lot more to Narcissa than the fandom gives her credit for.
Monday 6th June 2011 22:32

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Becoming Mrs. Malfoy: Adjustments and Worries
I enjoyed this story! Narcissa never really seemed the dark type and just married the wrong man... Although she did love him I imagine...
Wednesday 8th June 2011 10:27
Becoming Mrs. Malfoy: Adjustments and Worries (Author Response)
Thanks. I always picture her as being very traditional and wanting to please her family. It just led her in the wrong direction.
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