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Sunday 18th December 2011 08:19

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

24: Putting Back the Pieces
whens your next chapter being released ? i really cant wait, its such a good story
Tuesday 20th December 2011 07:09
24: Putting Back the Pieces (Author Response)
It's up! thanks for your interest. Hope you will let me know how I'm doing.
Thursday 1st December 2011 10:20

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 29

24: Putting Back the Pieces
Awesome update!
Thursday 1st December 2011 11:19
24: Putting Back the Pieces (Author Response)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you think so.
Amelia* Bones
Tuesday 29th November 2011 17:30

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

24: Putting Back the Pieces
It's ok that you're only doing one chapter a month. I skipped one so I actually had two to read today. YAY! This is such a well done and well thought out tale. So glad things are starting to look up for them.

Are you British, BTW?

Thursday 1st December 2011 11:18
24: Putting Back the Pieces (Author Response)
Thank you so much for your kind comments! No, I'm not British, I'm American and I've always lived in the state of Florida. I did spend some time in college living in London....I owe all the Brit-speak in my story to my beta Arnel, who, although not British herself, spends a lot of time researching Briticisms and has become very good at replacing American words or phrases with British ones. She's taught me a lot as well. Thanks again!
Saturday 26th November 2011 15:46

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 142

24: Putting Back the Pieces
Ahh... still loves him, well, I must say I'm relieved

Only a few chapters left? Hmm... I would not say no to a few more than just a few
Thursday 1st December 2011 11:09
24: Putting Back the Pieces (Author Response)
Of course she does still love him, and could never really stop. My story is much like any other Yes, only three chapters left here. I have written an epilogue, although i can't say at this point whether it will be ready for one of my monthly updates. I also may write some more one shots in this universe, we will see! I'm glad you would not say no to more and I will keep that in mind. Thanks for reading and the review!
Wednesday 23rd November 2011 22:32

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1157

24: Putting Back the Pieces
Wow! A really heavy chapter. Ginny is still reluctant to embrace a full relationship with Harry. I can understand why she was apprehensieve before. Now it is acting more like a habit. She has gotten used to holding back from Harry and being herself but holding Harry at a distance has become easier and more "normal" to her. I'm glad Harry is working with Dr. B so well. That is a really good change in his life. He has someone in his life now he can trust but he has a choice about trusting Dr. B. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
Thursday 1st December 2011 11:05
24: Putting Back the Pieces (Author Response)
Thanks Patches. It isn't easy for Ginny to change her habit of holding Harry at a distance so suddenly, especially with what happened between them. Many readers would like to see her warm up more quickly but this is the way I definitely think it would have happened. Harry had a lot of choices in therapy, including how seriously to take it and he has really chosen to try and turn himself around. I am also glad he has another trusting adult in his life now,and I see him always sharing a relationship with Dr. B. Thanks for the great insightful reviews, always and I look forward to sharing more with you.Cheers, R
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