I like, so I review... Loved the piece. Kudos to PS for
their "story of the week" - doubt I would have found your stories
Great portraying of the fear and the grief - and then the immense
relief when Ginny is returned to and reacquainted with her brothers in
the hospital wing. Loved it. And also loved the fact that
it was a short piece, then I can devour as a break from other, more
boring "need to do"-stuff.
And some men understand a lot more than traditional male role models are thought to do.
This was very well done. It grabbed me at the beginning and held on until the very end. Good job. Had tears in my eyes just reading this.
Only Ron and Harry were in the room discussing Ginny with the other brothers before they went to save her. That's the only thing that I disagree with, everything else was terrific. Thank you for your time and effort.