As much as i did enjoy this fanfic (and i read all of them), there is WAY too much "borrowed" from other movies/books. It is one think to borrow ideas from a story, but to take the dialoge, and put it word for word in your story is a bit much. Harry Potter is not LOTR, and Harry Potter is not the Matrix either, nor is it Star Wars. Go play somewhere else if you're not getting the reviews you want. But don't ask for opinions, and then run away when you don't like what you get. Have fun at fanfic.