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gymnastgal19
Friday 29th August 2008 19:26


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

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huh this is interesting... and slightly confusing... at least you wrote more on this lol
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chiantiqueen
Monday 24th December 2007 03:22


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159

The Battle's Done
Great story, can't wait to read the sequel to find out what's going on...
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pyromain
Friday 29th June 2007 13:17


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

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I really liked the story, the last line has me searching for an sequel because I just can't stop reading and hope there is one. Top marks from me for this story.
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crazyredhead
Monday 31st July 2006 10:20


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 184

The Battle's Done
what i thought dumbledore was dead it is good but jumps around some i like it though
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Teva
Thursday 20th July 2006 03:00


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Superbly done, but I'm not really sure what the last bits about.
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fairylights
Sunday 16th July 2006 21:19


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8

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More? Please?
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ohhhdear
Sunday 16th July 2006 13:13


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Isn't this really a WIP? Who is Deborah and why is she brought into the last part of this story... there are no further chapters attached. Puzzling.
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Arnel
Friday 30th June 2006 00:19


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 582

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Oh, I sincerely hope there is more to this story than just this one chapter! Your characterizations of JKR's characters brings them to life wonderfully and makes me want to read more about them. As I was reading, I found myself feeling sorry for poor Crookshanks and hoping that Ginny does somehow find a way to smuggle him into Hermione's room--I think it would do both cat and mistress a world of good. This is a great story and I hope there's an update coming soon.

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Connor Landon
Thursday 29th June 2006 20:12


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 188

The Battle's Done
I don't get the ending. There is more coming so that I will? Other than that, it was entertaining.
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platypus621
Thursday 29th June 2006 13:52


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 28

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Um, I don't really understand the ending or what Ginny got so mad about but other than that, its really good.
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Thursday 29th June 2006 00:30


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whos deborah and where does she come in?
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GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 28th June 2006 12:18


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1396

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Nice story ... but left hanging at the end. Is there a sequel ???
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critmo
Wednesday 28th June 2006 04:51


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 685

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Well written, but I don't get it. What session is Harry talking about, and where does this Deborah come in?
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daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 27th June 2006 12:22


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230

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Oh. This is really good. I am going to read the next story. I hope that is good to.
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jessy
Monday 26th June 2006 04:52


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 114

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wow!
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Wooster
Thursday 25th May 2006 11:27


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 525

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Interesting...what does it all mean, I wonder...
Very well written...absolutely thrilling!
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YelloWitchGrl
Tuesday 31st May 2005 15:26


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

The Battle's Done
Very interesting.  I am curious to see where you are headed and off to read the next chapter.

One small note, Filch (with Mrs. Norris) was not the caretaker when Mr. and Mrs. Weasley were at Hogwarts.  Mrs. Weasley states that in GOF I believe.  :-)
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Laurel Carmer
Sunday 29th May 2005 21:32


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13

The Battle's Done

I had this, and a few other of your stories, recommended to me.  I found, when I got here, that I'd read this before.

Anyway, sorry for not commenting before, but I really liked this and am off to read the others.  You are a very good writer, please don't stop.

I'll comment a bit more on each story.

Laurel

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kjpzak
Saturday 28th May 2005 21:23


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As a Pacific Northwesterner, I have to say I like where Deborah lives!  :)  The spell is interesting and Ginny's heartfelt guilt over her part touching.  I loved Remus' evaluation on Harry's choice of family members!  And Hermione - she can't even relax in the hospital.  I can't wait to read the enxt one!
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wvchemteach
Wednesday 3rd November 2004 22:43


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 168

The Battle's Done

I hope this story is the begining of something more between Harry and Ginny. It seems at the moment they are kind of dancing around each other.  In some ways it's similar to Ron and Hermione during the 4th and 5th books without the fighting.

I'm always torn when I read coming together stories (I'm assuming that is where this is headed.) I know that for dramatic purposes it is good to draw out the couple coming together, but at the same time it is very frustrating for a reader especially if you know what is going on in the minds of both characters and know that simple fear of rejection is the one thing keeping them apart.

I look forward to reading the rest of your series.

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