huh that was interesting... it was a lil confusing though...
good job though!!! I loved this idea of harry killing voldie. using his love and infiltrating his mind and using those thoughts
ginny died?!?! :O:O :'(
This is very well done. It is a good story, but it is too dark for my tastes. It is defeatist, and despite all the horror Voldie brings, I think that contradicts the Harry Potter world. Harry and Ginny have to survive to put an end to his evil. Very good story despite my disagreement of the ending.
I don't even know what to say. I can tell you that I'm crying, and that my heart hurts, that I'm afraid something like that is exactly what is going to happen, and that you wrote it so beautifully. So incredibly...sad. But you captured it all brilliantly. Congrats.